Seasons of Change
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Comment from royowen
We are made in God's image, but every man does not, or will not recite that. But yes, if one believes that God will redeem and give that inheritance was meant for everyone that believes, the inheritance is theirs. Beautifully written Jim, you have written a superb, poem, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
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We are made in God's image, but every man does not, or will not recite that. But yes, if one believes that God will redeem and give that inheritance was meant for everyone that believes, the inheritance is theirs. Beautifully written Jim, you have written a superb, poem, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 28-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
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Roy, my deepest and mosr sincere thank you!
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A pleasurec
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
Even though there are a few places where your meter is less than perfect. your main ideas are beautiful and articulated excellently. I loved your descriptions of the soul of man. The rhymes are smoothly written.
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Even though there are a few places where your meter is less than perfect. your main ideas are beautiful and articulated excellently. I loved your descriptions of the soul of man. The rhymes are smoothly written.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
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Verna, thank you so much. I know that my meter is often quite sophomoric and I appreciate your allowances toward my efforts.
Comment from lyenochka
Thank you for sharing this lovely spiritual verse. I feel like it was almost like a congregational liturgical reading where one speaker would say the first for lines and the congregation would repeat the first line. Well done!
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Thank you for sharing this lovely spiritual verse. I feel like it was almost like a congregational liturgical reading where one speaker would say the first for lines and the congregation would repeat the first line. Well done!
Comment Written 28-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
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Oh, I love that idea. Thanks for your support.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I would like to say that this poem is in Tochaic metre, alas Jim it is not. You have written a few poems with this sentiment and and you have summed this one up by highlighting the points you want to make in red, a poignant write, love Dolly x
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I would like to say that this poem is in Tochaic metre, alas Jim it is not. You have written a few poems with this sentiment and and you have summed this one up by highlighting the points you want to make in red, a poignant write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
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Dolly, I guess I?m doomed to failure in writing meter, back to free verse? thanks for bearing up with my sophomoric nonsense. Jim
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Don?t give up Jim, you have had success with metre before, keep trying, bless you x x x x
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Don?t give up Jim, you have had success with metre before, keep trying, bless you x x x x
Comment from Ricky1024
This chapter was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and have a great day.
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
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This chapter was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and have a great day.
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 28-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
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Thank you, sir!
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Seasons of the Mind, Body, and Soul III, presented with six AaaA-rhymed quatrains, allows several positive attributes exist within the soul of man. Neat.
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This poem, Seasons of the Mind, Body, and Soul III, presented with six AaaA-rhymed quatrains, allows several positive attributes exist within the soul of man. Neat.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2023
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Bill thanks, Jim
Comment from Evelyn Hopkins
Really love this poem and the message it brings. The truth of god and the light that shines from taking that chance and follow god. I love! Hope all is well and have a good day :)
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
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Really love this poem and the message it brings. The truth of god and the light that shines from taking that chance and follow god. I love! Hope all is well and have a good day :)
Comment Written 28-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
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Thank you, Evelyn!
Comment from Sally Law
In a world where men and women struggle with their indentity, I appreciate this even more.
If a person is linked with God, manhood and womanhood will be embraced, and souls and spirits will realign to all these wonderful things.
An illuminating poem for your book.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal :))
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In a world where men and women struggle with their indentity, I appreciate this even more.
If a person is linked with God, manhood and womanhood will be embraced, and souls and spirits will realign to all these wonderful things.
An illuminating poem for your book.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal :))
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Comment Written 28-Apr-2023
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Thank you, as always! Jim
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Well done. Is this what is called a loop poem?
Whatever, I needn't know, for things I enjoy reading don't need to fit a poetic form that someone, sometime ago decided was proper writing etiquette, bedamn with poetic licensing.
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Well done. Is this what is called a loop poem?
Whatever, I needn't know, for things I enjoy reading don't need to fit a poetic form that someone, sometime ago decided was proper writing etiquette, bedamn with poetic licensing.
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Comment Written 28-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
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yes one could call this a loop poem, in that each stanza could be a stand alone.
