Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

well, at least he was wearing a helmet :-)

this was a fun little story poem - well maybe not fun for the star, but fun for me hehe

smooth rhyme and flow and a cool pic

one suggestion i have is maybe try a green background with a red or light blue font to blend in with the pic? just a thought ;)


thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2023

Thank you, Shelley.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

You know, sport is always risky, my daughter was a brilliant netballer, (similar to basketball, internationally played) but she ruptured her ACL and although reattached buy operation, she was never going to be the same, she really can't play anymore, beautifully written my friend, as always, blessings Roy

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 Comment Written 23-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2023

Roy, I am so sorry read this about your daughter. My college football ended due to an ACl tear, back when they did not have micro surgical repair. I hope she can find a new sport.

reply by royowen on 23-Apr-2023

She?s a mum now, she?s forty now, she played under duress for awhile, so I don?t think she will.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

The last time I rode a two wheeler bicycle, the wheels got called in a crack in the road and I went down, so I decided that boy there would be no more riding a bicycles. Patricia

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 Comment Written 23-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2023

Patricia, I can and do truly relate, Jim