Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

Smiles all around, Paul!
What a creative and original poetic offering.
And I love it!
I smiled at the thought of God creating a new filing system for all the prayers He reads and answering prayers with group email!
Made my day, Paul!

Thank you for sharing!
diane

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023

Glad I could make your day, Diane. Thanks for the review.

Comment from evilynne

Excellent

Even God needs help to keep up with these times. Your poem is well written and humorous. Now if God could just gift this old lady some of the computer knowledge. I know, I'll pray and he'll put me in the files. Good luck in the contest! Evi

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023

Thanks, Evi. You and I will be standing in the same line, waiting for that prayer to be answered.

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Very well written, Paul. Fine metre and rhymes and a very logical progression of God's need to organize a much expanding data-base.

Group email was a perfect solution to address the "issue".

Much enjoyed. :))

Gloria

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023

Thanks, Gloria. I hope He has more luck with that high tech stuff than I do.

Comment from Wayne Fowler

Excellent

Quite imaginative. Well done even though some of the rhyming is questionable- lot:bought. But then I remembered your New England heritage (bought, got, cot). (smiley face here)
Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023

Thanks, Wayne. We do have a different rhyme scheme here in Maine.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I suppose with the advent of the computer age, God had found away of storing all those prayers that have mounted over the centuries, being a collector of all those wondrous, (I'm just wondering what He does wilh all the tears that have accumulated ate the same time, perhaps He has a larger than normal fish tank, beautifully written Paul, an excellent treatise. Beautifully written my friend, excellent imagination, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023

Thanks, Roy. A fish tank full of tears. That's imagination!

reply by royowen on 19-Apr-2023

Well done

Comment from Janet Foor

Exceptional

I love you humor Paul. This is a delightful and fun take on getting God up to speed on technology.
Fun and funny with a fanciful charm.

Well done
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023

Thanks, Janet. I hope God thinks it is delightful and funny.

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Hi Paul
This is a witty and smoothly metered poem abut bringing God up to date with the computer age.
I would think he wouldn't need the language help since he created all the languages. But, a data base and spread sheet on the kind of prayers and who is saying them can clear his head for other more important things.
I would think he could start on reforming those with vain and violent prayers.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the contest,

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023

Thanks, Joan. You are probably right about the language. I'll bet He has had second thoughts about doing that.

reply by dragonpoet on 19-Apr-2023

You're welcome, Paul. Maybe he has.
Joan

Comment from LJbutterfly

Excellent

Haha! I wish I could get an email from God. This is an imaginative and fun poem with well chosen rhyming words to deliver your message. I like the idea that God is up to date on the latest technology. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023

Thanks, LJ. I'll see if I can get you on the list.

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Yeah, Paul, where does Amazon not deliver. I bet he hasn't to pay for prime. Joke aside, this was a great and fun poem for the contest. Good luck. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023

Thanks, Ulla. Amazon is amazing.

reply by Ulla on 19-Apr-2023

I couldn't agree more!

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

there's amazon delivery in heaven? COOL!!

this was a great fun humourous poem about the power of prayer
intriguing word choices with smooth rhyme and flow

one suggestion i have is maybe try a black or dark grey background to blend in with the cool pic you have and either a red or yellow (or both lol) font? just a few thoughts for you to kick around ;)


thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023

Thanks, Shelley. I do have problems with the pictures.