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Ancient Art of Poetry

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A compilation of poems

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This is unfortunately the case when and adult tries to fool a child and manipulate then with their personal urges and the child is powerless, very sad words here, love Dolly x x x

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 Comment Written 17-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2023
    Thank you Dolly! yes very true indeed. God gave me some brains and I knew on some level things weren't right even though I didn't. Understand the rules but this is my way of peeling the onion. I'm in and taking the power away and I thank you and everyone who reads it and offers their thoughts. Very valuable to me. Thank you also for your review and for your time probably help your day is wonderful!
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2023
    Thank you Dolly! yes very true indeed. God gave me some brains and I knew on some level things weren't right even though I didn't. Understand the rules but this is my way of peeling the onion. I'm in and taking the power away and I thank you and everyone who reads it and offers their thoughts. Very valuable to me. Thank you also for your review and for your time probably help your day is wonderful!