Comment from Ginda Simpson

Excellent

You poem brought a smile to my morning. The alarm clock, friend or foe? Who invented the snooze alarm, clearly did not think through how it may NOT serve us well.

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2023

Haha well said!! Thank you!

Comment from kiwisteveh

Excellent

tricky form to use for humour but you have managed it better than other entries for this contest that I have seen.

Well done and good luck. Don't smash the snooze button next time!

Steve

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 Comment Written 17-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2023

Thank you, Steve!

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I know that feeling well as we struggle to get up in the morning and thankfully I don't have to get up at any particular time anymore! A fun post for the contest, love Dolly x x x

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 Comment Written 17-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2023

Thank you, Dolly!