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Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "My Faith Knows Every Season"Do good and feel good poems
53 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
The seasons of God's creation, how so very well described and visualized, the faith and our hope we can read in these wonderful words, very well written and presented, "He washed me white as snow" what an excellent line, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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The seasons of God's creation, how so very well described and visualized, the faith and our hope we can read in these wonderful words, very well written and presented, "He washed me white as snow" what an excellent line, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 18-Apr-2023
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Debi, this is a wonderful poem of faith and thankfulness for all the gifts that He has bestowed upon us. Your poem reads and flows well, and I could feel your love of God and nature from within. Of special note:
In Summertime, the temps are hot
His gifts of flowers; show and tell
(SOTU, I'm sure the fields in MN must be gorgeous in the summertime, especially the wild flowers.)
Good rhyming. Great photo choice. It really gives you the feeling of each season. A pleasure to read. Well done. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. Xo. M
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2023
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Hi Debi, this is a wonderful poem of faith and thankfulness for all the gifts that He has bestowed upon us. Your poem reads and flows well, and I could feel your love of God and nature from within. Of special note:
In Summertime, the temps are hot
His gifts of flowers; show and tell
(SOTU, I'm sure the fields in MN must be gorgeous in the summertime, especially the wild flowers.)
Good rhyming. Great photo choice. It really gives you the feeling of each season. A pleasure to read. Well done. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. Xo. M
Comment Written 17-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2023
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Margaret, you sweetheart. Thank you for the kind words and the awesome stars. I appreciate you so much for this lovely review package! Hugs! Debi
Comment from jake cosmos aller
love this deep and moving tribute to the seasons and their deep connection to the broader universe. I like the images, and font colors as well, as the song chosen to illustrate the poem.
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love this deep and moving tribute to the seasons and their deep connection to the broader universe. I like the images, and font colors as well, as the song chosen to illustrate the poem.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2023
Comment from shelley kaye
nice song - listened to it while i typed out this review... a great seasonal poem
loved the picture and the imagery was excellent
smooth flow and rhyme
one suggestion i have is to maybe try the black background? the other colours are great!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2023
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nice song - listened to it while i typed out this review... a great seasonal poem
loved the picture and the imagery was excellent
smooth flow and rhyme
one suggestion i have is to maybe try the black background? the other colours are great!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 17-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2023
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Hey Shelly, thanks so much for your lovely review and comments. And I always welcome feedback, so I did try the black background, and as always it looks amazing w that colored font. I just don't know tho about it w the picture. Can you take a look and tell me what you think? Thanks again Shelley!
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i think it looks great! brings out the picture and the coloured fonts.
you may want to make the type a little larger though. but other than that, it's excellent looking!
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I increased the font and the black from the branch seemed to pop out more to enhance it, so thank you again Shelly. You are such a lovely woman!
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
Another wonderful write my friend. Very beautiful words and a nice overall presentation background and font choice. It has a great flow and rhyme. Love it.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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Another wonderful write my friend. Very beautiful words and a nice overall presentation background and font choice. It has a great flow and rhyme. Love it.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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Sorry this is so late Joanne, but I thank you w all my heart for the lovely comments and the six stars/
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Your kindly welcome my friend 🙂
Comment from Kerry Foley
Hello there my friend what a gorgeous and colorful poem you've planned here. I love the whole mix. Great presentation on everything well done.
-Kerry
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Hello there my friend what a gorgeous and colorful poem you've planned here. I love the whole mix. Great presentation on everything well done.
-Kerry
Comment Written 17-Apr-2023
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
This is one of my favorites of your poems. You did an excellent job of comparing the seasons to your faith. The picture was a good illustration match for the poem. I hope this does well in the contest!
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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This is one of my favorites of your poems. You did an excellent job of comparing the seasons to your faith. The picture was a good illustration match for the poem. I hope this does well in the contest!
Comment Written 17-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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Sorry this is so late Verna, , but I thank you w all my heart for the lovely comments and the six stars/
Comment from Gina Schneller
Hello there! What a beautiful poem and perfect picture to go along with it! Excellent choice. I really enjoyed it and the artistic, colorful way you did the words based on the seasons. ~ Thank you so much for sharing your writing with us all! ~ Best of luck in your writing journey! :)
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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Hello there! What a beautiful poem and perfect picture to go along with it! Excellent choice. I really enjoyed it and the artistic, colorful way you did the words based on the seasons. ~ Thank you so much for sharing your writing with us all! ~ Best of luck in your writing journey! :)
Comment Written 17-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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Sorry this is so late Gina, but I thank you w all my heart for the lovely comments and the six stars/
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I think the layout on this is striking. I liked this stanza best: I love my faith's rebirth in Spring
I walk His path in fresh~grown sod
Oh, the joy that it will bring
To someday see the face of God
The illustration is amazing, too.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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I think the layout on this is striking. I liked this stanza best: I love my faith's rebirth in Spring
I walk His path in fresh~grown sod
Oh, the joy that it will bring
To someday see the face of God
The illustration is amazing, too.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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Sorry this is so late Crystie, but I thank you w all my heart for the lovely comments and the six stars/
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Sorry this is so late Crystie, but I thank you w all my heart for the lovely comments and the six stars/
Comment from Mario PIERRE
Beautiful poem, as all the work of Debi are!! I like the use of seasons, colours and nature to describe the beauty of His Creation, and the feelings of pure
joy that they bring.
Lovely!!!
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Beautiful poem, as all the work of Debi are!! I like the use of seasons, colours and nature to describe the beauty of His Creation, and the feelings of pure
joy that they bring.
Lovely!!!
Comment Written 16-Apr-2023