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Seasons of Change

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A collection of 30 poems in thirty days

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Comment from royowen
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God I'd Love, and He is the Father of lights, the wellspring of wisdom, and the bottomless well of knowledge. Who knows my comings and goings, how I love, and how I don't, I don't have to share with Him, but I do, because His love is greater than mine, beautifully written wisdom Jim, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
    Roy, I so value your depth of faith and supportive encouragement, thank you so much!



reply by royowen on 14-Apr-2023
    Well done Jim
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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An epic write Jim and we match out seasons to our events and there is a time for every purpose under heaven and it remind me of this song by the Byrds:

To everything (turn, turn, turn)
There is a season (turn, turn, turn)
And a time to every purpose, under heaven
A time to be born, a time to die
A time to plant, a time to reap
A time to kill, a time to heal
A time to laugh, a time to weep

A joy to read, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
    Dolly, I remember the the Byrd?s singing this as if were just yesterday! Thank you for your continued encouragement.
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
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So much of Ecclesiastes is difficult to understand, but this is clear, and you have created a poem to illustrate it well. I pray that our world will take your last stanza to heart.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
    Verna, I am right in lockstep with you on this, for certain!
Comment from Brandon Clark
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Truly well conceived and written! My favorite lines:

"Over the ebb and flow of these events, I found it best to cast away
stones of the past and make time to crush them into clay"

The imagery those lines elicit is vivid and couldn't be improved upon!

Well done!
Brandon

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
    Brandon, thank you very much!
Comment from patcelaw
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I really do enjoy the book of Ecclesiastes. You have spoken this very well and your wonderful riding. I enjoyed listening to it. I especially enjoy Ecclesiastes 7:8. So many in our world today I do not know that there is a time to keep silent and also a time to speak many times people are silent when they should speak and speak when they should keep silent. Patricia.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
    Patricia, my goodness! I am very honored by your generous stars and strong validation, thank you so much!
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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This is it, you have courageously hit the half way point. Now it is downhill all the way, and things become easier from here on in. You have penned a powerful poem to hit the half-way line and I wish you good luck for the follow-on. kay

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
    Kay, my, oh, my! I find it a bit hard to beleive how this month is rush toward completion. I am, as always, grateful for your positivy shared by your words.
Comment from Boogienights
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These seasons of change poem, really touch my heart very sincerely. Our world if late has become a very dark place and your words offer a measure of comfort. Thanks for sharing.

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 Comment Written 14-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
    Boogienights, I am pleased you find a bit of comfort, in the words written from my heart.
Comment from nomi338
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Awesome us of scripture. Even more awesome use of Bible trained learning to be able to put into one's own words, words inspired by God's anointed writers, words that you yourself have come to understand and put to very good use. This is a very powerful write. I salute your effort, it is remarkably well done.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
    Nomi, I am so delighted with your validation that all those hours spent reading the GOOD BOOK has perhaps sunk in this aging mind.
    thank you so much.
Comment from Ricky1024
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A lot going on with this.
The Biblical saying strengthened the core.
Ir read well and flowed well with no Grammar.
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Thanks for sharing this.
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 Comment Written 14-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
    DoctorRicky1024, thanks a bunch!