Paper Dolls and Old Photos
Grandmother introduces granddaughter to the past.18 total reviews
Comment from cat frenette
This is beautiful Gretchen! I loved how you drew me into Grandma's world right along with her grandchild. As a Gramma, I can relate to the child's fascination with a lifetime so foreign to a them, and hope that I can have that same best-friendship with my own. Paper dolls, indeed!
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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This is beautiful Gretchen! I loved how you drew me into Grandma's world right along with her grandchild. As a Gramma, I can relate to the child's fascination with a lifetime so foreign to a them, and hope that I can have that same best-friendship with my own. Paper dolls, indeed!
Comment Written 08-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much for this nice review. Gretchen
Comment from Sankey
This was a lovely story. Totally believable. Just one little suggestion for the name of the song. (')When the Saints Go Marching In(') Well done. Funny how FS wants more some times than others.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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This was a lovely story. Totally believable. Just one little suggestion for the name of the song. (')When the Saints Go Marching In(') Well done. Funny how FS wants more some times than others.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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Thank you for that. I will fix it next. I appreciate this nice review. Gretchen
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Awe, This was so sweet. Life was so different when we were children. It is hard to explain how it was to the young ones of today. It boggles my mind when I think of the technology that has been introduced since I was young. Good job, Gretchen. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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Awe, This was so sweet. Life was so different when we were children. It is hard to explain how it was to the young ones of today. It boggles my mind when I think of the technology that has been introduced since I was young. Good job, Gretchen. Nancy:)
Comment Written 08-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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Yes it is. They don't teach them history anymore so its all fiction to them. Thanks for this. Gretchen
Comment from Wendy G
Gretchen - so beautifully written!! It almost brought tears to my eyes, (although I am a bit sad today). But I too saw your grandmother as a strong and brave little girl, living in a time when things were not easy. I remember my own paper dolls. I can imagine her joy in having a best friend to share about paper dolls. If I only had a six! It would be yours.
Wendy
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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Gretchen - so beautifully written!! It almost brought tears to my eyes, (although I am a bit sad today). But I too saw your grandmother as a strong and brave little girl, living in a time when things were not easy. I remember my own paper dolls. I can imagine her joy in having a best friend to share about paper dolls. If I only had a six! It would be yours.
Wendy
Comment Written 07-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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No six necessary. Your review and comments were enough. Thank you. Gretchen
Comment from Mario PIERRE
What a beautiful story. Using photographs wisely can make a story spring to life and have the reader being emotional. You succeded in doing just that here. I so loved the story, and the "twist", the last line.....really inspirational. It says it all as the effect grandma had on the narrator!
Well done!
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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What a beautiful story. Using photographs wisely can make a story spring to life and have the reader being emotional. You succeded in doing just that here. I so loved the story, and the "twist", the last line.....really inspirational. It says it all as the effect grandma had on the narrator!
Well done!
Comment Written 07-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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Thank you for this awesome review. Grrtchen
Comment from Teri7
I loved this story you have penned about paper dolls and old photos. When I was young I loved playing paper dolls with my best friend. She lived across the street from me. Sometimes we would play in one of our back yards and other times in a field. We had the best time. You used great descriptive words and great dialogue! Thanks for making me smile tonight! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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I loved this story you have penned about paper dolls and old photos. When I was young I loved playing paper dolls with my best friend. She lived across the street from me. Sometimes we would play in one of our back yards and other times in a field. We had the best time. You used great descriptive words and great dialogue! Thanks for making me smile tonight! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 07-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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You are very welcome. Thank you for reading. Gretchen
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
What a sweet story, Gretchen. I liked your 2 characters.
You did a great job with their personalities. Grandma
loved sharing about her time as a child, and her granddaughter
loved hearing the stories. Their interaction was fun to think
about and know how much Grandma's time has changed.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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What a sweet story, Gretchen. I liked your 2 characters.
You did a great job with their personalities. Grandma
loved sharing about her time as a child, and her granddaughter
loved hearing the stories. Their interaction was fun to think
about and know how much Grandma's time has changed.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
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Comment Written 07-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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Thank you for this nice review and comments. Gretchen
Comment from Ric Myworld
It's always nice to look back at those happy times when we get to talk and learn about those who are older, many times, maybe smarter, and with so much more experience to share. Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
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It's always nice to look back at those happy times when we get to talk and learn about those who are older, many times, maybe smarter, and with so much more experience to share. Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 07-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
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Thank you, Ric. Appreciate your review and comments. Gretchen
