Comment from JT traveller

Excellent

Very true sentiments expressed here. As I remark often, change only occurs when people hurt.

I enjoyed your poem. It has a very deep meaning that is subtle. Well done.

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023

Thank you, Jacqueline

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

What a statement. It should be crosstitched on a pillow. It's true. You can learn so much. Who your real friends are, how strong you are. The most important lesson is where your strength comes from. Be it God, family, society as a whole. Wonderful poem. Wisdom at it's best. Gretchen

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023

Thank you, Gretchen

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Yep you're absolutely right my friend. The trouble with pain or hurt, I will cause us to withdraw completely, or we'll pay the price of loving and persist in walking positively, well done, excellent essence poem, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023

Thank you, Roy

reply by royowen on 05-Apr-2023

A pleasure

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

i agree. this was a powerful little essence poem

nice work!

thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest


shelley ð?¦?

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023

Thank you, Shelly

Comment from Ginda Simpson

Excellent

I now know what an essence poem is and yours is a great example. Perfectly rhymed, it speaks the truth that is universal. Well done. Good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 05-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023

Thank you, Ginda