Poor Ned
Just say no.11 total reviews
Comment from Ricky1024
Cheating Ned.
Yes, should instead.
Got himself a blow-up Doll.
Then instead?
Ned would not be dead.
And life with wife would be calm.
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This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky
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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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Cheating Ned.
Yes, should instead.
Got himself a blow-up Doll.
Then instead?
Ned would not be dead.
And life with wife would be calm.
...
This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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Oh, my my my! This contest is indeed a fun one!
