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Seasons of Change

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A collection of 30 poems in thirty days

24 total reviews 
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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You are off to a great start, JLR. Your prologue gives
readers much information about your concept for the
project. I like the categories you've selected. They will
give you many paths to follow throughout the month.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes, Jan

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2023
    Thank you Jan!
Comment from lyenochka
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Wonderful!! I'm so glad you are participating in this year's NaPoWriMo, Jim! Thank you! How is your health, speaking of "season of health"? Are you recovering well after getting that pacemaker? Best wishes to you in this challenge!!

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2023
    Thank you for the sponsoring the contest and yes I am recovering well, thank you again for the prayers of support.
Comment from Terry Broxson
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This looks like an interesting challenge you have set for yourself. I look forward to dropping into your seasons, and reading what you have to say and if it works for you. Terry.

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2023
    Terry, thank you!
Comment from karenina
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You go! Every year I promise myself this year for SURE I'll jump in with both feet! Alas, I post so infrequently that the thought of developing thirty poems in thirty days is paralyzing to me. Now that I've confessed that I can sit back and cheer on all ye of stalwart hearts who carry on!

I love your concept. Best of writing to you!

Karenina

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2023
    Karenina, thank you...
reply by karenina on 31-Mar-2023
    Looking forward to reading your thirty days of poems!
Comment from Bill Schott
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This prologue for the book, Season of Change, lays out what is coming and the basic challenge of covering April with poetry that splits life into nature, marriage, faith, and health. Interesting.

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2023
    I hope so Bill.
Comment from Ginda Simpson
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I like that you have chosen to write about life throughout the seasons. You have reminded me that I need to get on with writing down my intentions for this challenge. I look forward to reading your poems. Best wishes.

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2023
    I am hopeful that a I can provide something interesting.
Comment from patcelaw
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This sounds like a very interesting idea to do 30 forms in the month of April with the theme of seasons. I look forward to seeing the work that you produce in this coming month. I wish you the best in all of your writing. Patricia

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2023
    Patricia, thank you.
Comment from Julie Lau
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JLR, I applaud your drive and ambition. I like your theme of change in the different aspects of life: that should provide adequate material to get you through the month. Tomorrow is 1st April. Will you mention April Fool's Day? Julie L

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2023
    Hummm, perhaps so...
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Good luck with your thirty poems Jim and I shall be here with my pen waiting to review them all, I wish you luck and the subjects sound interesting, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2023
    I will value your reviews and comments, thank you Dolly!
Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi Jim.
This is a clear prologue to your book of poems for next month, National Poetry month. You have a good plan and the poems sound interesting.
Good luck in your writing. Hope the ones about health show you are doing well.
Joan

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2023
    Joan, thank you and yes one more hurdle in life now in the rearview mirror
reply by dragonpoet on 31-Mar-2023
    You are most kindly welcome, Jim.
    That's good.
    Joan