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the yellow rat

One way to clean out a rats' nest

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Comment from Bill Schott
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This story, The Yellow Rat, is understandable in a way, though I don't see myself torturing a rat like that. If it were a lawyer, well, I can see that as justified.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
    dear Bill, All I can say is Heaven help any lawyer who gets caught in your cross hairs. cheers Cass
Comment from jessizero
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This was an exciting story that made me feel nervous. You did a great job telling this story. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
    dear Jessie, thank you for your review of
    The Yellow Rat. Your kind words mean more to me than I can say.cheers Cass
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I have never heard of this solution to clear out a rats den! Must remember this one, this yellow belly ran for the hills, much enjoyed, a fun post Cass, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
    dear Dolly, Thank you for this review. I think I've
    answered you in another part, so I'll leave it at that. cheers Cass
Comment from lyenochka
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Hahaha! That's hilarious and also a rather humane way of pest control. You told the story so succinctly and the dipping into yellow paint seemed like an odd revenge but it worked perfectly! Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
    dear helen, by now you've read the sequel, so I
    think no more needs be said. cheers Cass
Comment from pome lover
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well, weren't you the clever one; but tell me, how did you catch the male and have the courage to hold him????? Don't think I could've done it. I have caught mice in little cheese traps and taken them all and thrown them in the garbage - traps and all, but without touching them. and they were just mice.
Anyway very good biographical non-fiction story told in a few impressive words!
Katharine

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
    dear Katharine, Please, please read this story's sequel The Rat and Me. It gives an explanation of what happened that morning. cheers Cass




























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reply by pome lover on 05-Apr-2023
    I did!!! and commented.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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Really? You caught a rat/ Painted it Yellow? Released it? and the rest of the rat pack hightailed it out of town? What happened to your poetry? Good luck with your entry.

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 Comment Written 26-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
    dear Tom, By now you've read The Rat and Me, so I'll leave it at that. cheers Cass
Comment from Julie Lau
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Lobethal in S.A.? Hey there fellow Crow Eater (well, almost). That was a good story, and a very novel way to clear out a nest of rats. I used a Siamese cat, myself. She was also good at robbing rabbit burrows of kittens, and seeing snakes off the property. All the best, Julie Lau

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 Comment Written 26-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023
    dear julie, sounds like a very talented cat. Snakes???
    We had a cat that died of snakebite after there was one found under the baby
    cot. Back when we lived in the boondocks. 1945-1946. I started school at 6
    at Waltowa Primary School.I was there about 4 weeks when we came back to town for the birth of Mum's7th child. cheers Cass

reply by Julie Lau on 05-Apr-2023
    Once my ex passed a snake in the hallway. Trouble was, he was going out; it was coming in. It was just a baby. We found it and vacuumed it up.