You Didn't Ask...But
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Comment from Ricky1024
Stories like this one is rare.
A vicious murder at only fourteen
It seems Mr. Fucci was suffering from sour Wienie-Puss Syndrome.
This is the kind of person that could never see any humor or could even understand reality.
This is the kind of person that should be imprisoned but not in jail but a mental facility for the rest of his living days.
This is a person that is so dangerous as a teen. Can you imagine what he be capable of as he's becomes an adult?
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Well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this.
I think?
Doctor Ricky 1024
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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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Stories like this one is rare.
A vicious murder at only fourteen
It seems Mr. Fucci was suffering from sour Wienie-Puss Syndrome.
This is the kind of person that could never see any humor or could even understand reality.
This is the kind of person that should be imprisoned but not in jail but a mental facility for the rest of his living days.
This is a person that is so dangerous as a teen. Can you imagine what he be capable of as he's becomes an adult?
...
Well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this.
I think?
Doctor Ricky 1024
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Comment Written 23-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from BethShelby
What a horrible story this is. I can't imagine why the other kid would go somewhere with him at that hour. It seems he might thinik what he did was something to be proud off. I can't begin to know what might have gone on in the mind of a fourteen year old that would do such a terrible thing to another human.
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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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What a horrible story this is. I can't imagine why the other kid would go somewhere with him at that hour. It seems he might thinik what he did was something to be proud off. I can't begin to know what might have gone on in the mind of a fourteen year old that would do such a terrible thing to another human.
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Comment Written 23-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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Appreciate your comments and the review. Glad you enjoyed this posting.