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This sounds like terrific heartache here and the grief-filled aftermath of having your heart ripped from your chest is how dreadful the pain is when a love affair ends. Your words are powerful and terrifying, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 22-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
Thank you so much Dolly! Better out of my pen than anywhere else!
Hope you are well!
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