Comment from
BermyBye50
This is an excellent entry in the Kyrielle poetry contest. Your three quatrains read well and incorporate the form brilliantly and the theme is perfectly suited in the poem.
All the best in the contest,
Eugene
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Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
Eugene, thank you for providing your comments and good wishes.