Dribbles And Drabbles
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Comment from lyenochka
So the demon just randomly poisoned living things? I don't typically read horror. You have all the elements of it and you have us guessing from the beginning as to who the character is as "spawn" is unclear until we read "demon." It's odd that this evil character has to experiment like a human scientist.
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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023
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So the demon just randomly poisoned living things? I don't typically read horror. You have all the elements of it and you have us guessing from the beginning as to who the character is as "spawn" is unclear until we read "demon." It's odd that this evil character has to experiment like a human scientist.
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Comment Written 06-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023
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Comment from royowen
I like this one, who doesn't relate to a mischievous demon, who scatters abroad, and when he does he understands the frailty of his true victims, us, beautifully written, just love the motel room notice. Well done, good luck, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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I like this one, who doesn't relate to a mischievous demon, who scatters abroad, and when he does he understands the frailty of his true victims, us, beautifully written, just love the motel room notice. Well done, good luck, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 06-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Glad you enjoyed this posting. Appreciate the review.
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