Ancient Art of Poetry
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Our search for honesty makes us all naive and finding it is almost impossible in this world full of falsehoods. I think the advancement in technology has thrown us into our mobile phones and we are already standing in our own manmade phone booth, a poignant write Lea, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2023
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Our search for honesty makes us all naive and finding it is almost impossible in this world full of falsehoods. I think the advancement in technology has thrown us into our mobile phones and we are already standing in our own manmade phone booth, a poignant write Lea, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 05-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2023
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Thank you Dolly!
Comment from Kaiku
Dr. Who had his magical phone booth, are you seeking one as well? Just being able to recapture that gaze of yours makes the read all that more enjoyable. I`m not flirting, I just have an affinity for being stopped in my tracks. Your words are rather extravagantly soulful, if that term can be used. There is a freshness to turmoil you uncover. On a presentation note- a larger font might be warranted, but that is just me. The color of your background tends to shrink the black in your font.
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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2023
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Dr. Who had his magical phone booth, are you seeking one as well? Just being able to recapture that gaze of yours makes the read all that more enjoyable. I`m not flirting, I just have an affinity for being stopped in my tracks. Your words are rather extravagantly soulful, if that term can be used. There is a freshness to turmoil you uncover. On a presentation note- a larger font might be warranted, but that is just me. The color of your background tends to shrink the black in your font.
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Comment Written 05-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2023
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Yes thank you I will. I will bring up the font on that! Thank you so much for your review! It is kind and insightful and is very much appreciated. I'm glad you liked it!
Thank you again and hope your day is great!🙃
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