Comment from
Ricky1024
Well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
The picture works well with the character and your poem.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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My Complete Synopsis;
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly
Thanks for sharing this and good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 05-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2023