Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I could hear the gentle waterfall in this presentation and rippling water over those smooth stone and the calm and serene atmospheric you created with your words, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023

Thanks!

Comment from jacquelyn popp

Excellent

Beautufully written poem with absolutely beautiful artwork included. I love waterfalls. I love the feelings of peacefullness and tranquility that I get when sitting in front of one, and just listening to the sounds of the water. I also wrote a poem awhile ago on this site about a waterfall. Thank you for sharing. Well done. Great topic for your poem. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023

Thanks very much!

Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

I love the opening words of
Ripples in rivers
very good descriptive alliteration and a lovely little poem for the seven words or less contest. Cheers

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023

Thanks, where do you live, you said Cheers.

reply by Pearl Edwards on 02-Feb-2023

Townsville, Australia

reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023

Australia, that is right. I wrote a very long story about the advantages of being a woman. :)

Comment from Nicki Nance

Excellent

You used your seven words wisely. Your choice of photo and centered layout touwere a brilliant touch. The presentation added another layer of serenity to this work. Nicely done.

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 Comment Written 02-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023

Thanks!