You are the Sunshine
a message of love30 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, You Are the Sunshine, gathers "warms" and "brilliance" to further sell the identification of sunshine, as well as the "shimmers" and "murmurs" of the evening. Nice.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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This poem, You Are the Sunshine, gathers "warms" and "brilliance" to further sell the identification of sunshine, as well as the "shimmers" and "murmurs" of the evening. Nice.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you Bill for the lovely review. I appreciate your kind words.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Karyn2
Oh the gorgeous colours of this poem are divine! So descriptive and rich. I love all the imagery used to express love that evokes all the feelings of warmth and safety. The rhyme is so effortless in its ABAB form. A enjoyed reading this one very much.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Oh the gorgeous colours of this poem are divine! So descriptive and rich. I love all the imagery used to express love that evokes all the feelings of warmth and safety. The rhyme is so effortless in its ABAB form. A enjoyed reading this one very much.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you Karyn for this stellar review. I appreciate your kind comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from jenintorre
This is a very romantic two stanza poem and the artwork that you've chosen matches perfectly. It reminds me of the song 'you are the sunshine of my life' which I have always liked. Good luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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This is a very romantic two stanza poem and the artwork that you've chosen matches perfectly. It reminds me of the song 'you are the sunshine of my life' which I have always liked. Good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you Jen for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I appreciate your kind comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Mary Shifman
This is a gorgeous poem and if I had another six I would definitely give you one. This poem certainly deserves it. Your rhyme and meter are excellent and your imagery is very descriptive. I also love the sentiment. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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This is a gorgeous poem and if I had another six I would definitely give you one. This poem certainly deserves it. Your rhyme and meter are excellent and your imagery is very descriptive. I also love the sentiment. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you Mary for this stellar review. I appreciate your kind comments and the virtual six.
Blessings
Janet
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You are welcome.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Good entry for the Two Stanza Poem writing prompt contest. However, the contest asks for two stanzas,...only...
The poem is very romantic and has nice imagery.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Good entry for the Two Stanza Poem writing prompt contest. However, the contest asks for two stanzas,...only...
The poem is very romantic and has nice imagery.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 10-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you Gypsy for your encouraging review. I appreciate your kind comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from dragonpoet
These abab quatrains use metaphor well to describe your love according to nature. I like the artwork as a metaphor for the beginning of love and the hope of lasting love.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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These abab quatrains use metaphor well to describe your love according to nature. I like the artwork as a metaphor for the beginning of love and the hope of lasting love.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 10-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you Joan for this stellar review. I appreciate your kind comments.
Blessings
Janet
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Hi Janet,
You are most kindly welcome on both accounts.
Joan
Comment from Ginda Simpson
A love poem experienced through all the senses, thanks to your lovely imagery. It flows nicely and is very endearing. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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A love poem experienced through all the senses, thanks to your lovely imagery. It flows nicely and is very endearing. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you Ginda for your encouraging stellar review. I appreciate your kind comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Terry Broxson
You have written a lovely poem for this contest. I wish you well in the contest. I admit that if my dearly departed wife was still alive, she might amend the last two lines with something about "murmurs of loud snores":...Excellent job. Terry.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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You have written a lovely poem for this contest. I wish you well in the contest. I admit that if my dearly departed wife was still alive, she might amend the last two lines with something about "murmurs of loud snores":...Excellent job. Terry.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you Terry for your thoughtful and fun review. I appreciate your candor and wish your dear wife were still here to amend those lines.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Boogienights
This is one of the more lovely of the two stanza poems that I've read. A beautiful message of love that is a reflection of nature...does that make sense? Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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This is one of the more lovely of the two stanza poems that I've read. A beautiful message of love that is a reflection of nature...does that make sense? Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you for this stellar review. I appreciate your kind comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Kaiku
A prose ready for insertion in a Valentine`s Day card. Very well written with a chocolaty flow. When morn we wake...how about when morn we `just do it again` HA
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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A prose ready for insertion in a Valentine`s Day card. Very well written with a chocolaty flow. When morn we wake...how about when morn we `just do it again` HA
Comment Written 10-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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I loved your stellar review. Valentine card it is!!!.
Blessings
Janet
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super