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Perfection

Simply what the art gave me

19 total reviews 
Comment from Ric Myworld
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

My, my, my, what a poem and picture combination to make the mind run wild with desire. But you always do that so much, drawing people into a world they can only wish to exist. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
    Ric, your review is poetry in itself. Thank you very much.
    Always
    Justafan of yours
    Missy
Comment from jmdg1954
Excellent
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Wow. This was exciting. You were able to bring the reader in, fully involved with the tone set by your words. I found it sensual and clean.

Very nicely done in good taste.
John

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
    Hello John, nice to see you here again. This review is lovely and much appreciated.
    Thank you
    Always
    Justafan of yours
    Missy
Comment from Jim Wile
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This poem is perfection! Really good job on a very beautiful, sensual poem about the physical attraction of this woman for this man. And so beautifully displayed with that gorgeous picture and the black background. Outstanding job!

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
    Thank you Jim for this wonderful review of my work.
    With each review, I find encouragement to continue so thank you again :)
    Always
    Justafan
    Missy
Comment from royowen
Excellent
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I think when I was young, there seemed so many young girls that fitted this beautifully written and descriptive free verse dear friend, you have composed and written this so well, good job, good luck, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2023
    Aww thank you my sweet friend 🦋
    I hope the new year has started off being good to you.
    Thanks again for this splendid review :)

    Always
    Justafan of yours
    Missy
reply by royowen on 09-Jan-2023
    Bless you Missy
Comment from dragonpoet
Excellent
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This is a well written free verse poem using line breaks and repetition well showing the man's strong emotions for this woman.
I like the red font for love. I think you should make the font size bigger because I found it hard to read.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the contest
Joan

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2023
    Joan, thank you for the lovely review and I do hope the holidays and the new year has been amazing for you!

    Always
    Justafan of yours
    Missy
reply by dragonpoet on 09-Jan-2023
    My pleasure, Missy. Same to you.
    Joan
Comment from Kaiku
Excellent
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Yeah, the pearls and the low hanging jeans would put most any guy in a howling position. Wait, this is FS, do I need to be politically correct or pronoun aware. HA. Good stuff from my side of the podium. Good luck.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
    Not on my post!! Lol
    Thank you so much for the giggles and the review :)

    Always
    Justafan
    Missy
reply by Kaiku on 08-Jan-2023
    👍
Comment from Pantygynt
Excellent
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Oh to come across something like this! Is it love or is it lust? Whichever I wish it would happen to me. That is of course ridiculous. I am far too old for something like this, more's the pity. Someone will come along soon and tell me to act my age. I don't have to act my age. I am my age.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
    You?re never too old my sweet friend!!
    Thank you for spending a few moments with me and leaving this lovely review:)

    Always
    Justafan of yours
    Missy
Comment from Marienkiefer
Excellent
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Inciting passionate viewpoints, with great doses of perfection through indulgent admiring eyes.

Working very well in your poem: the eyes of the suitor, the responding heart, resplendent beauty in natural physique.
-The writer captures very well here spontaneity of emotions, infatuation and being in love with....
Good look on your entry, in keeping with theme.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
    Ahhh a new name in my reviews! I shall indeed return the favor.
    Thank you

    Always
    Justafan
    Missy
Comment from RodG
Excellent
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I am old, but I know how I'd feel if I ever saw LIVE the woman in your photo. Indeed she is "perfection." But can you work at eliminating such cliches as "His heart skipped a beat" and "mouth dry as a bone"?
Rod

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 Comment Written 08-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
    I will certainly try if you will consent to return and rewrite the review :)

    Justafan
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
    Btw.. I?m old as dirt!! Another cliche
reply by RodG on 08-Jan-2023
    Will do.
reply by RodG on 08-Jan-2023
    Your poem is much better. I added a star to my rating.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
    Thank you:)