Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

At least you saved the dog, so that makes me feel better. Now you need to get Crissy out of the mess she is in. Your story is getting better with each chapter. Keep writing.

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023

Thank you as always for your support and for taking the time to read my story. Hope the New Year is being kind to you!

Hugs, Carol

Comment from Shirley McLain

Exceptional

I am liking this story and can't wait to read more. You did a great job with this chapter. There is lots of tension, action, and your writing lets me see what is going on. Have a great afternoon. Shirley

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023

Thank you as always for your support and for taking the time to read my story. Hope the New Year is being kind to you!

Hugs, Carol

Comment from karenina

Excellent

I've been nail biting, worried about Crissy and her dog! Things are looking up... The phone will help identify Crissy, the vet will save her dog, and Wyatt, I suspect will be trapped in his own tangled web!

Karenina

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023

Thank you as always for your support and for taking the time to read my story. Hope the New Year is being kind to you!

Hugs, Carol

reply by karenina on 13-Jan-2023

2023 has begun with a series of unfortunate events! Ths saga continues/// But you know what THAT is like!

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

Serves him right!! But all this doesn't help Crissy, but I'm soooooo pleased Brandi has been taken to be looked after. Now perhaps she will find her mistress?? Or, perhaps Crissy will find a way out of those handcuffs or something?
I think Wyatt will be in for another shock when Terry does get back to him, I don't think he'll like what Wyatt has been up to. Oh, it truly is all happening in this chapter! Well done, my friend. I wish I could write as fast as you!! Love and lots of hugs. Sandra xxx

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023

Thank you as always for your support and for taking the time to read my story. Hope the New Year is being kind to you!

Hugs, Carol

Comment from Carol Clark2

Excellent

Another great chapter! The dialogue is realistic and fills in a little backstory for the reader. One small suggestion: 'Don't waste your breath?' (.) I'm glad Brandi is OK, and I hope Crissy is found soon. Glad you're writing again! Carol

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023

Thank you as always for your support and for taking the time to read my story. Hope the New Year is being kind to you!

Hugs, Carol

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

:You did a great job cleaning a lot of that mess up. I 'm glad you took care of getting help for the dog and making Wyatt's day go even further down the toilet. You're off to a good start for the New Year. I hope this year will be a better one for you and me as well.

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 Comment Written 02-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023

Thank you as always for your support and for taking the time to read my story. Hope the New Year is being kind to you!

Hugs, Carol

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

So Crissy's phone should give them some clues. Also if they really do use search dogs, they might lead them to Crissy. Also, the bullet in the dog should be a clue who's gun fired it. I can't wait until our friends get there. Love the story.

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 Comment Written 02-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023

Thank you as always for your support and for taking the time to read my story. Hope the New Year is being kind to you!

Hugs, Carol