Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

Thanks again for sharing another part of your wonderful journey with us readers. I like reading about other folk's trips, but I am a stay-at-home person. I get homesick thirty miles from home. Nice story.

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2022

---

reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022

Thank you for the review. I don't have the desire to travel any more mainly because it isn't so easy to walk werever I want to go without pain. Home is a great place to be. I apparciate the review.
Beth

reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022

Thank you for the review. I don't have the desire to travel any more mainly because it isn't so easy to walk werever I want to go without pain. Home is a great place to be. I apparciate the review.
Beth

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

You did a great job, Beth, describing the sights you saw
as the bus made its way to your next destination. The bus
seemed crowded to me. The scenery would have been great
to see and think about the history involved. Hopefully, you
and the others got over the colds ok. The group picture wouldn't
have interested me much. I'd rather have pictures of the historical
places etc.

other times there was a chain to pull or a foot petal.--->pedal

Thanks for sharing, Jan

This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2022

---

reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022

Thank you Jan, I appreciate the review and comments. It is amazing to me that the world is the same as age as in Europe but their history is preserved back thousands of year, Most of their structures are thousands of years old but ours seem to be torn down and rebuilt so often very little is really old. We don't seem to cherish our history like they do.

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

Sounds like a wonderful time and very well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
...
Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned most Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing this and have a Blessed day.
Doctor Ricky 1024

This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2022

---

reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022

Thank you for reading about my trip and for all you comment and analysis.
Beth

Comment from lyenochka

Exceptional

I'm really enjoying your trip, Beth! We can enjoy the sights without the cramped bus and catching colds from the fellow travelers. And you always remember the details even the bathrooms. You're right that toilets are different all the world around even though we all have to go!
I'm worried that Evan didn't tell you everything and there might be some problems back home.

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2022

---

reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022

Thank you Helen. I'm enjoying reliving this trip myself. When I think about it hard enough I lot comes back I'd forgotten. At the moment, I can't recall anything that went wrong while I was gone. I'm just thinking about Evan's personality. He told me things on a "Need to Know" basis. I sure he wouldn't have thought I needed to know being so far away. I'm sure he wouldn't have wanted to wrorry be tellling me somthing I couldn't do anything about. Joy didn't want to know anything that happened back home and Evan wouldn't have wanted to tell anything that might worry me.. LOL Thank you so much for the five stars.