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Dreams of Running

My future awaits

51 total reviews 
Comment from AnnaLinda
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Hey, Jesse...

I've not been on the site for a very long time and I have read several poems on and off and not reviewed them, so my review could be considered a compliment. I like the fact that almost anyone could relate to finishing the race on top! No thanks to special sneakers though.

I found your poem not veey smooth, but the positivity is great. I truly hope your health & strength meet your dreams in every way.

Linda

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
    Thank you for taking the time to change your rating to excellent. I appreciate your kindness in regard to my ratings. Thank you for your honesty and upfront appraisal of this poem. I also hope my health keeps on keeping on and I accomplish all the goals I have set for myself.
    Jesse
reply by AnnaLinda on 14-Dec-2022
    Bless you!
Comment from Douglas Goff
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This has a nice smooth run to it. Made me thing that secretly you may a super hero. If that is the case say hey to Spider-Man for me.

I really enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing this!

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2022

Comment from Ricky1024
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Dreams are very interesting and sometimes come true.
This was wonderfully written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
    Thanks, Doctor Ricky for this astute and precise review of my poem. I appreciate all of your kind words and I had a dream you might review me and it came true. How about that?
    Have a wonderful rest of your week.
    Jesse
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
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I enjoyed reading your poem. I think I'll borrow your shoes, and then, one foot off the ground, I, too, will travel wherever my dreams take me-especially away from any conflict.

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2022

Comment from Poetic Friend
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Jesse,

I really like this poem for so many reasons. First, it is well-written, embedded in metaphors that work to convey your message. Second, it reminds me of my mom who wanted so badly to walk again during her last days on earth.

I am praying you get to walk and run soon. I love your optimistic attitude. Have a great weekend.


 Comment Written 27-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
    Thanks, my friend, for your insightful review. I appreciate your good wishes and addressing my optimistic attitude as something you love. Have a lovely rest of your week.
    Jesse
Comment from GWHARGIS
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Loved this. I could picture a young boy with new sneakers. The thoughts of racing faster than the wind going through his mind. This has more than that imagery to you now. Nice poem. Gretchen

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2022

Comment from harmony13
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I found the author's words uplifting, descriptive and creative. Thank you
for the author's notes - they are filled hope! I found these words filled
resilience and perseverance. The poem flows and connects well. I also
liked the words above the title! Hi Jesse, hope you are doing well....Maria

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2022

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello, Jesse,

When I was little, I dreamt about flying. It felt so real ... the sensation of soaring going up and down close to the houses that had no ceilings ... I could see the people inside. Then the sensation of flying down to earth and touching the ground. I think children have that ability but we lose it when we grow up and people tell us is not possible. I loved to fly.

I can understand wishing being able to walk and run. These days I have a hard time walking long distances and I can't run well. I'm afraid of falling down. I have done it a couple of times and it's not fun. I'm in the process of getting my body in shape so I can do those things.

well done, Jesse

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
    Thanks, Gypsy, for sharing your amazing youth and how you loved to fly in your dreams. I too used to fly in my dreams while a child. These dreams I wrote about were metaphors for how I want to walk and eventually run far distances. Thanks for sharing and for the kind words of encouragement. Have a happy day.
    Jesse
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Thanks for sharing the notes and poem, Jesse.
-You did a good job with it and the rhyming couplets.
-I am glad to hear they are pleasant dreams, and
how you have "shoes with special powers."
-The scenes you describe are vivid and
create a peaceful, yet joyful mood
"While singing a triumphant song."
-I like the ending, using "real dream."
-Here's to making a dream a reality,
and with your attitude, I know you will do it.
-Very well done.
-One small thing: you need 'guard' because it goes with shields.

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 04-Dec-2022
    Thanks, Pam for the detailed review. I will do it as soon as I can as far as making my dream a reality. I already changed the edit you suggested...thanks so much for pointing it out. I hope you have a wonderful weekend!
    Jesse
reply by Pam (respa) on 04-Dec-2022
    You are very welcome, Jesse. I am glad you appreciated the edit, and I know you will continue to make your dream a reality.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2022
    Yes, I will continue to successfully strive to make my dream come true.
    Jesse
Comment from susand3022
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I liked this poem of your dreams, Jesse, which you obviously hold close to your heart.
It's obvious that you're keeping them in your view and working toward your goals! Keep moving!
Susan :)

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2022