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Mommy Cares

a 575 poem on mother's love

24 total reviews 
Comment from susand3022
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Hi Nassus,
I loved this, and it's really good timing right now. I bet it resonates with a lot of people. Lots of sick children out there just now. My favorite was being tucked in with a chest full of Vicks Vapor Rub. Of course, there were 4 of us... hardly time for a lot of 1-on-1 time. lol
A lovely poem
Susan :)

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
    Thanks, Susan, for the wonderful comment and for the five stars too.
Comment from Wendy G
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I like what you are saying about the healing warmth of a mother's love. I wonder though if her hands should be cool, to reduce the fever, and to link with the coldness of ice-cream. Just a thought .... Well done.
Wendy

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
    Thanks for the very positive comment and thanks for the five stars too.
Comment from Dawn Munro
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This is an absolute delight. It brings back memories of my mother, and her touch when I was ill too, only I remember her fingers feeling cool on my hot forehead...(lol). A very sweet 5-7-5! Thank you for sharing. :)

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
    Thanks a lot for the very positive comment and the five stars too.
reply by Dawn Munro on 25-Nov-2022
    You are very welcome.
Comment from JoannaN
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It is so cute :) both the poem and the picture are so good, and they work so well together. Getting love and attention is definitely something that is a giant solace during the time of an illness.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
    Thanks a lot for considering this poem cute. Thanks for the five stars too.
Comment from Mario PIERRE
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It's always touching and comforting when we read about a mother's love or the relationship between mother and child. Your poem says it all in a few syllables: a mother heals with her heart. Her touch is the ultimate medicine.
Great poem
Mario

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
    Thanks, Mario, for considering this a great poem. God bless.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This 575 poem on mother's love, caring you at your young day when you had fever and your mother's gentle rubs were like magic potions for your healing recovery as if you felt like eating ice cream on a hot, summer day; well said, well done, post god speed more, share post not 4 self-joy-pride but 4 God and readers worldwide Alcreator Litt Dear (DR)

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
    Thanks a lot, Litt Dear for the very positive comment and five stars too.
Comment from Raul1
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I am so happy for you that you have a caring mother that cares about you. A real happy ending. I did enjoy this poem. It is wonderful. Nice job! Beautiful poetry! Thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
    Thanks, my friend for considering this a beautiful poem. Thanks for the five stars too.
Comment from royowen
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My mother wasn't affectionate when I was young, though we were clothed, fed and sheltered from the elements, I never enjoyed the gentle touch of a mother or father, but learned from observation, I was different with mine, and my wife was and is so nurturing with our kids and grands, I'm a blessed man, beautifully written dear friend, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
    Thanks, Roy, for the lovely and perceptive comment. As always God bless.
reply by royowen on 23-Nov-2022
    Most welcome
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Nice image and presentation.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-You pay a very loving tribute to your mother
for her "caring, loving touch" and the ice cream, too!
-This would have been a good entry for the
5-7-5 cash contest.
-I don't know if you have tried any, but there's
nothing to lose; you don't pay to enter,
and your name still goes on them.

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
    Thanks, Pam, for the heartwarming comment and for suggesting that I can join the contest. God bless.
reply by Pam (respa) on 23-Nov-2022
    You are very welcome!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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There is nothing like the warm touch of a Mother who cares and that nurturing touch can stay with us forever as we remember it as healing, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
    Thanks a lot Dolly for the positive review and the five stars too.