Tanka Collection
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Comment from AP Apgar
I like your Manyoshu poem - excellent picture presentation! The poem paints a beautiful picture supported by your notes - flower bending down,
metaphors are excellent - at each step present a clear picture of the breezes journey under the moon - following the path to the door - stargazer lilies' clever! Good Job.
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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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I like your Manyoshu poem - excellent picture presentation! The poem paints a beautiful picture supported by your notes - flower bending down,
metaphors are excellent - at each step present a clear picture of the breezes journey under the moon - following the path to the door - stargazer lilies' clever! Good Job.
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Comment Written 12-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Douglas Goff
Very nice word play and flow. I had to look up the title to see what it meant. Very well-played.
The color scheme and photo are well thought out and wonderfully displayed.
Very nice work here Master Poet!
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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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Very nice word play and flow. I had to look up the title to see what it meant. Very well-played.
The color scheme and photo are well thought out and wonderfully displayed.
Very nice work here Master Poet!
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Comment Written 12-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy