The Chronicals Of Bethica: The Rise
Viewing comments for Chapter 34 "The Chronicles of Bethica"Abram must defeat a deadly humanoid race of beings
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Comment from prettybluebirds
While this is not my favorite genre, I found this story exciting and intriguing. It held my attention form the first word to the last. Your scenes are vivid and the dialogue is superb. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2022
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While this is not my favorite genre, I found this story exciting and intriguing. It held my attention form the first word to the last. Your scenes are vivid and the dialogue is superb. Nicely done.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2022
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Maria Millsaps
Ahh, the battle before the final fight. Your story was very engaging, and the descriptions of the Cavemorphs were terrific. This sounds like a Star Wars spin-off. Excellent.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2022
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Ahh, the battle before the final fight. Your story was very engaging, and the descriptions of the Cavemorphs were terrific. This sounds like a Star Wars spin-off. Excellent.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2022
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Thank you for reading and your review.
Comment from royowen
It always struck that it would stop a lot of bloodshed if armies simply settled a dispute, or repel an invasion if battles were settled by a David a Goliath encounter, much like the emperor and Gangus are doing now, it would certainly limit the staggering loss of life Beautifully described and written Amahra, the battles with that amazing array of creatures allied and engaging in battle, well done, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2022
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It always struck that it would stop a lot of bloodshed if armies simply settled a dispute, or repel an invasion if battles were settled by a David a Goliath encounter, much like the emperor and Gangus are doing now, it would certainly limit the staggering loss of life Beautifully described and written Amahra, the battles with that amazing array of creatures allied and engaging in battle, well done, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 07-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Roy, for the stars. It's always a pleasure hearing from you. I'm glad you liked it.
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Most welcome