Armageddon
Maybe it's not as bad as you imagine!13 total reviews
Comment from RodG
This Armageddon story did something such stories should not do: It made me chuckle. I love the tongue-in-cheek humor as the Narrator tells us about her unexpected shopping spree with her fabulously rich mother-in-law. You plant your clues so cleverly with the recurring tick, tick, tick refrain. Beautifully crafted with stunning details and word choices (e.g. the description of the make-up lady). Rod
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2022
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This Armageddon story did something such stories should not do: It made me chuckle. I love the tongue-in-cheek humor as the Narrator tells us about her unexpected shopping spree with her fabulously rich mother-in-law. You plant your clues so cleverly with the recurring tick, tick, tick refrain. Beautifully crafted with stunning details and word choices (e.g. the description of the make-up lady). Rod
Comment Written 01-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2022
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This review has just given me the BEST day! Thank you for your generous words AND rating! I couldn't appreciate them more!
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You are very welcome.
Comment from lancellot
This very nice. I think based all the immaculate details, that this will especially be relevant with the female readers and voters. Those members will really understand the character's feelings.
Good idea and good entry.
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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2022
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This very nice. I think based all the immaculate details, that this will especially be relevant with the female readers and voters. Those members will really understand the character's feelings.
Good idea and good entry.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2022
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I think you're right...though I have to say, the first reviewer was a man who claims we share a mother-in-law, and he bestowed six stars. So I'm hoping that's a harbinger of this story's appeal to both genders! Thanks for the review.
Comment from Thomas Blanks
Okay, everyone, listen up! The flash fiction story "Armeggedon" is FUNNY! If you don't enjoy this story, you have no sense of humor. I don't know how the Author and I can have the same mother-in-law, but that is beside the point.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2022
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Okay, everyone, listen up! The flash fiction story "Armeggedon" is FUNNY! If you don't enjoy this story, you have no sense of humor. I don't know how the Author and I can have the same mother-in-law, but that is beside the point.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2022
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!! Omg!!! You are the funniest man I will ever know! HAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAH