A New Sole
New soles-new job30 total reviews
Comment from royowen
Well done, a darn good entry in this contest, the words you were given to solve and meld into your poem were very well done, good luck in the contest, you've done a sterling Job, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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Well done, a darn good entry in this contest, the words you were given to solve and meld into your poem were very well done, good luck in the contest, you've done a sterling Job, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 17-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much!
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My pleasure
Comment from Terry Broxson
That is a very creative entry for this contest, good luck. You used all the words with a minimum number of words. And the adventures from this starting place are endless! Very well done. Terry.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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That is a very creative entry for this contest, good luck. You used all the words with a minimum number of words. And the adventures from this starting place are endless! Very well done. Terry.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
That's a nice-looking pair of shoes. Shiny shoes are mandatory for anything social and especially for anything business related. With these shoes, the style and shine, I think something is about to happen.
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That's a nice-looking pair of shoes. Shiny shoes are mandatory for anything social and especially for anything business related. With these shoes, the style and shine, I think something is about to happen.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from tempeste
Ciao mystery poet, you now have 4 well deserves votes.
I love that you were able to pen such an inventive, creative poem with only two lines.
I don't keep my shoes very polished, my father would always make a fuss saying mine looked shabby. He was right. (sigh)
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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Ciao mystery poet, you now have 4 well deserves votes.
I love that you were able to pen such an inventive, creative poem with only two lines.
I don't keep my shoes very polished, my father would always make a fuss saying mine looked shabby. He was right. (sigh)
Comment Written 17-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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Thank you!!
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You are welcome!
Comment from zanya
Yes that must be a poetic feat - weaving the required word list into this very short format and managing to convey a sentiment - thanks for sharing -lovely pic
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Yes that must be a poetic feat - weaving the required word list into this very short format and managing to convey a sentiment - thanks for sharing -lovely pic
Comment Written 17-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Lol, you didn't need many more words to write your poem! But it works perfectly. This is a very clever idea, and very clever use of the prompt words. You've nailed it! Well done and good luck! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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Lol, you didn't need many more words to write your poem! But it works perfectly. This is a very clever idea, and very clever use of the prompt words. You've nailed it! Well done and good luck! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 17-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I love new shoes and never really thought of adventure when wearing them but I loved your unique and inventive words here, I hope your next step is fruitful and successful, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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I love new shoes and never really thought of adventure when wearing them but I loved your unique and inventive words here, I hope your next step is fruitful and successful, love Dolly x
Comment Written 17-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Wendy G
Well - that was very short and sweet. Hard to deny that it provokes thought about the back story and the potential resulting story. Original - and it meets the prompt requirements. Best wishes.
Wendy
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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Well - that was very short and sweet. Hard to deny that it provokes thought about the back story and the potential resulting story. Original - and it meets the prompt requirements. Best wishes.
Wendy
Comment Written 17-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Carlos' girl
Oh yeah. You nailed this. This is awesome. This poem has my imagination on overdrive. I think of the guy just starting out after his soul was saved by A.A. and he gets new soles for his big new job. This poem.has infinite possibilities.
Great work. Hope u win the contest
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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Oh yeah. You nailed this. This is awesome. This poem has my imagination on overdrive. I think of the guy just starting out after his soul was saved by A.A. and he gets new soles for his big new job. This poem.has infinite possibilities.
Great work. Hope u win the contest
Comment Written 17-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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Thank you so much for the 6 stars!!
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You definitely deserve them. That poem is the bomb
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I love this verse!!
You did a great job with the prompt, very clever and creative.
The simplicity of presentation and language allows the reader to create their own narrative about what the new adventure might be.
I am a big fan of open ended writing, I find it intriguing, engaging, and exciting.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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I love this verse!!
You did a great job with the prompt, very clever and creative.
The simplicity of presentation and language allows the reader to create their own narrative about what the new adventure might be.
I am a big fan of open ended writing, I find it intriguing, engaging, and exciting.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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Thank you!!
