Comment from
Theodore McDowell
Brilliant. Perfectly crafted with wonderful images, like the tie and the mechanical watch that add profound details to the poem and make it real. Great for the Free Verse Poem contest. You have my vote.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
Thank you very much for reading and reviewing it. I'm glad it came across so well and I'm very grateful for your time. I hope you have a wonderful day.