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Adventures around & upon a hill

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Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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More interesting things are happening to the monks. Francis is giving them comfort with his flowers, making her think of her friend Jill. Some of the brothers do find occasions to enjoy touching and not suffer like failure to thrive babies. Life is good with a little imagination. Good story.

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 Comment Written 30-May-2022


reply by the author on 31-May-2022
    Thank you for your involved review. I'm glad you enjoyed it.