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It Was Real, It Was Fun

But it wasn't always real fun

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Comment from the13thpoet
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Hello Earl a good day to you. I hope this finds you well. I enjoyed your salute to military poem nice execution on the writing prompt. It was a entertaining and fun piece of poetic storytelling. Good job and good luck in the contest. Have a great weekend.

 Comment Written 27-May-2022


reply by the author on 27-May-2022
    Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
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Yeah, it can be quite a choice, military or college. Military will definitely give a person a more varied experience, but college could be a bit safer. Sounds like you have been around with the military.

Nice chronology. Good job.

 Comment Written 27-May-2022


reply by the author on 27-May-2022
    Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Wendy G
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A well written life story with rhyme, describing all the places you have been. I felt it was well written although the metre was a bit different and irregular. Good wishes for the contest.
Wendy

 Comment Written 27-May-2022


reply by the author on 27-May-2022
    Thank you very much, Wendy, for taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Donna G. (aka Sam Duck)
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There is a nice rhythm to your poem, and it carries one through effortlessly. Your military career certainly seemed to help you see the world, and connected you with a lot of wonderful people! I enjoyed your poem!

 Comment Written 26-May-2022


reply by the author on 27-May-2022
    Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
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That picture from Full Metal Jacket brings back memories from the movie. It was a very sad scene when the one guy shot himself to death. My husband was in Bremerhaven, Germany by the North Sea. He was a military police officer. Thankfully, you came back home to tell about your time.
My husband went to college when he was honourably discharged.

 Comment Written 26-May-2022


reply by the author on 27-May-2022
    Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my work. I also went to college after my discharge.
reply by Carolyn Dooley on 27-May-2022
    You are welcome.
Comment from dragonpoet
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Firstly, Earl. thanks for your service. Sounds like you did some traveling in the service for the years you were in. Did you ever go to college. It is still possible. This is a good salute to the military.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the contest.
Joan

 Comment Written 26-May-2022


reply by the author on 27-May-2022
    Yes Joan I went to college and have even earned a masters degree. I'm a teacher and write part-time for a newspaper.Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my work.
reply by dragonpoet on 27-May-2022
    You're welcome, Earl. Good for you. You surely keep yourself busy,
    Joan
Comment from Gert sherwood
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But it wasn't always real fun
It Was Real, It Was Fun

Earl Corp your military rhyming poem I see has great couplets with humor was fun to read. I'm wondering if you write about how you disliked been in the military. The best to you in the contest
Gert.

 Comment Written 26-May-2022


reply by the author on 27-May-2022
    Thank you very much Gert for taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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BRAVO! Your contest entry is well thought out, Earl. The rhymes
are super, but more than those, the message is loud and clear. The
story flows well with great imagery. I love the title and the description
box. Your attention to detail is excellent. The image is perfect to
accompany your poem. Your dedication to service and to your buddies
is awesome.
Best wishes, Jan

 Comment Written 26-May-2022


reply by the author on 27-May-2022
    Thank you very much Jan for taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from royowen
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At least you got to travel the world in a sense, I've traveled extensively, but never as a soldier, my brother did a tour in Vietnam, got wounded, Dad was at Dunkirk in WW2, but just across the channel, escaped along will 300,000 other British troops, was discharged because his hearing was impaired by shell explosions, well done, Earl, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 26-May-2022


reply by the author on 26-May-2022
    Thank you Roy, for your family's service. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
reply by royowen on 26-May-2022
    Both have passed sadly, but thank you.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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My husband is retired military, after twenty-three years in. He did basic and AIT in Alabama, then to Germany, then Maryland, then Germany, then Fort Campbell, off to South Carolina, then Georgia, then Maryland, then Texas. Oh my. Yes, he did go to Desert Shield and Desert Storm, with a few follow ups in Afghanistan. Thank you for sharing this writing prompt with us.

 Comment Written 26-May-2022


reply by the author on 26-May-2022
    Thank you both for your service. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.