Interpretations For Consideration
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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry is in great form, Debra.
I didn't know of this word--thanks for the
lesson and informative notes. The image
fits nicely with your well thought out words.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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Your contest entry is in great form, Debra.
I didn't know of this word--thanks for the
lesson and informative notes. The image
fits nicely with your well thought out words.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 28-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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Thank you so much, Jan :)
I appreciate your kind feedback.
Best wishes as always, Debra
Comment from juliaSjames
Clever understated play on words in your poem, Debra. Timekeeping in both senses used to be an art form. Nice bit of alliteration to round off your 3-liner. Do you wear a watch? The only timekeeping devices I see on people's wrists are fitbits or fancy smartwatches. Good luck in the contest, my creative friend.
Stay safe and blessed, Julia
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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Clever understated play on words in your poem, Debra. Timekeeping in both senses used to be an art form. Nice bit of alliteration to round off your 3-liner. Do you wear a watch? The only timekeeping devices I see on people's wrists are fitbits or fancy smartwatches. Good luck in the contest, my creative friend.
Stay safe and blessed, Julia
Comment Written 28-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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Hello Julia :)
Thank you so much for your feedback.
I'm sorry to say that my own wristwatch hasn't been worn since I was bought a Fitbit about five years ago, apart from if I'm dressed up to go somewhere a bit fancier than usual, which is once every blue moon! How about you?
Best wishes as always, Debra x
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I don't even wear the Fitbit my husband gave me. All my watches are stored somewhere. Relics of the past. LOL
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:) x
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Keeping Time
by Debra White
Nice entry for the 3 Line Ekphrastic 5/7/5 contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. I like the presentationI wish you luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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Keeping Time
by Debra White
Nice entry for the 3 Line Ekphrastic 5/7/5 contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. I like the presentationI wish you luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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Thank you so much for your feedback, Gypsy, I always appreciate it :)
Best wishes, Debra x
Comment from royowen
I think that if I was an horologist, I would be more aware of the passage of tome than I am. It's the major enemy of men, each day we live could be our last. Heh heh. Beautifully written Debra, blessings Roy
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I think that if I was an horologist, I would be more aware of the passage of tome than I am. It's the major enemy of men, each day we live could be our last. Heh heh. Beautifully written Debra, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 28-Apr-2022
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Thank you for your feedback, Roy :)
Best wishes as always, Debra
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Most welcome
Comment from RodG
Thank you for adding anew word to my vocabulary. I grew up with a watchmaker who worked for my father, but he ever called himself a HOROLOGIST, and he took timekeeping very seriously. Rod
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Thank you for adding anew word to my vocabulary. I grew up with a watchmaker who worked for my father, but he ever called himself a HOROLOGIST, and he took timekeeping very seriously. Rod
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Comment Written 28-Apr-2022
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Thanks for your feedback, Rod :)
Best wishes, Debra
