Comment from
royowen
I thought that one had to write four stanzas, hence the '16' in the cube 16, but of course it won't matter in the scheme of things, I can relate to your post as a guitarist/singer/songwriter, well done, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 24-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
Hi Roy, you're so right! Thanks for pointing out the missing stanza, which I have since sorted out :) I appreciate your constructive feedback.
Best wishes as always, Debra
reply by royowen on 26-Apr-2022
Comment from
Regina Elliott
Wow, he has a lot of determination & dedication.
Great fairly short poem on
sticking to a worthy goal.
Blessings to you & yours. I
hope you keep up the
penning, it's fab. ~
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Comment Written 24-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
Thank you so much, Regina, I appreciate your feedback. Best wishes, Debra :)