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Poem 5/7/5

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Comment from Eternal Muse
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Oh, this is yummy, you make me hungry! There is nothing like grandma's apple pie recipe. Love the artwork and visuals.

An excellent contest poem describing a gormet's delight. I want a recipe! (smile). Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
    Great review - wish I had that recipe ! zanya
Comment from John Ciarmello
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I loved my grandma's apple pie, but you're right it was a pinch of this and a handful of that. So needless to say, neither one of us probably have our grandma's receipts. thanks for tantalizing the tastebuds.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
    Superb reveiw zanya
Comment from Paul McFarland
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Nice little Haiku. My grandmother had that same recipe. She never wrote anything down, so I'll probably never taste that kind of pie again. The picture makes my mouth water.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
    Great reveiw zanya
Comment from jessizero
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I am familiar with this recipe! LOL. I like your poem, and I like the picture that you selected to accompany the poem. Thanks for sharing, and good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 15-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
    Great review zanya