Interpretations For Consideration
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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your cute poem, Debra. The image is perfect.
I like the use of good alliteration of s and r. Good internal
rhyme of razzling/dazzling and good end rhymes and
personification. The conclusion is great, too.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2022
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I enjoyed your cute poem, Debra. The image is perfect.
I like the use of good alliteration of s and r. Good internal
rhyme of razzling/dazzling and good end rhymes and
personification. The conclusion is great, too.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 12-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2022
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Thank you so much, Jan, for your detailed feedback. I appreciate it :) Best wishes as always, Debra
Comment from Mary Vigasin
An upbeat and fun poem about the stylish and trendy zebras.
Congratulations on being the recognized writer for April.
I enjoyed these snazzy and snappy zebras.
Best regards,
Mary
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2022
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An upbeat and fun poem about the stylish and trendy zebras.
Congratulations on being the recognized writer for April.
I enjoyed these snazzy and snappy zebras.
Best regards,
Mary
Comment Written 12-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2022
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Thank you so much, Mary, for your lovely feedback and for your kind message of congratulations. I appreciate both :)
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Chris Davis
I hope you intended the piece to have a touch of humor as that is how it came across for me. Loved the rhyming lines and they worked well. It was a fun read and lightened my heavy day. Thank you.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2022
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I hope you intended the piece to have a touch of humor as that is how it came across for me. Loved the rhyming lines and they worked well. It was a fun read and lightened my heavy day. Thank you.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2022
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Hello Chris :) I'm so happy to have raised your spirits with my poem! It was definitely my intention to create a humorous piece, I'm glad it worked :)
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from mermaids
Excellent poem that captures the picture perfectly and they are all zebras!
"We're razzling, dazzling trendsetters" is a great line, it gives the zebras some posh and a celebrity feel to them. Excellent poetic form and use of words.
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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2022
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Excellent poem that captures the picture perfectly and they are all zebras!
"We're razzling, dazzling trendsetters" is a great line, it gives the zebras some posh and a celebrity feel to them. Excellent poetic form and use of words.
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Comment Written 12-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2022
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Thank you so much for your lovely feedback :)
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Sally Law
This is rousing good fun and so stylish. I enjoyed your inspiration for the free verse write. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the contest,
Sal XOs
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This is rousing good fun and so stylish. I enjoyed your inspiration for the free verse write. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the contest,
Sal XOs
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Comment Written 12-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2022
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Thank you, Sal, for your kind feedback. Much appreciated, as always :)
Best wishes, Debra x
