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Katherine M. (k-11)
I was not familiar with the Whitney poem format. However you have used it to good effect, with the alternating long and short lines being uMuch enjoyed.sed to create a question / statement effect.
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Comment Written 05-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2022
Thank you, Kate, for your kind feedback.
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from
royowen
The simple and very short answer is, the same reason one can't stay mad with a small child, sheer cuteness, and one's propensity not to be perfect hits one in the face. Well done Debra, , blessings Roy,
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Comment Written 05-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2022
I think you're probably right!
thank you for your kind feedback, Roy :)
Best wishes, Debra
reply by royowen on 05-Apr-2022