War And God
4 Line 1-5-5-9 Poem Contest Entry God Stops Wars Anywhere51 total reviews
Comment from Versch
Amen to your prayer. I honestly hope and pray everyday that the war will never escalate. I fear for the future of this world. The innocents always suffer, especially the women and children. Good luck in the contest.
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Amen to your prayer. I honestly hope and pray everyday that the war will never escalate. I fear for the future of this world. The innocents always suffer, especially the women and children. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
Comment from Sally Law
I agree with your beautiful poem/prayer as God embodies those attributes and more. He is love and war is contrary to that. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal :)
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I agree with your beautiful poem/prayer as God embodies those attributes and more. He is love and war is contrary to that. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal :)
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
Comment from JPGeo
I like the message and appreciate the sentiment of your four line poem. I believe you have misused omnipresent and omnipotent as nouns but your meaning is understood and poetically may be accepted by the reader.
Thank you for posting.
John
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I like the message and appreciate the sentiment of your four line poem. I believe you have misused omnipresent and omnipotent as nouns but your meaning is understood and poetically may be accepted by the reader.
Thank you for posting.
John
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Comment Written 29-Mar-2022
Comment from RGstar
As with the suggestion of war here, I agree completely. However, whichever, man has not learned, nothing is gained by war. Territory perhaps, but the blood is never forgotten, neither the stain and hate that lasts.
Best wishes.
RGstar
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As with the suggestion of war here, I agree completely. However, whichever, man has not learned, nothing is gained by war. Territory perhaps, but the blood is never forgotten, neither the stain and hate that lasts.
Best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 29-Mar-2022
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! In this poem the author say it all! The author's words
are strong, clear, promising and creative. I really felt the powerful
message in these words. The artwork compliments these words.
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Excellent Poem! In this poem the author say it all! The author's words
are strong, clear, promising and creative. I really felt the powerful
message in these words. The artwork compliments these words.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2022
Comment from Ulla
Well indeed, let's hope he can achieve that. That would be a major breakthrough and a miracle in itself as that has never happened before. But of course there's a first for everything. Good luck in the contest.
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Well indeed, let's hope he can achieve that. That would be a major breakthrough and a miracle in itself as that has never happened before. But of course there's a first for everything. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2022
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written and very true Four Line poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good words and prayer does truly changes things. May God bless you my friend. Teri
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This is a very well written and very true Four Line poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good words and prayer does truly changes things. May God bless you my friend. Teri
Comment Written 29-Mar-2022
Comment from oliver818
This is a nicely penned poem, I like the way you use omnipresent and omnipotent together, it works well as a center for the piece. The message is an important one too and I hope it is heard. Thanks for sharing
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This is a nicely penned poem, I like the way you use omnipresent and omnipotent together, it works well as a center for the piece. The message is an important one too and I hope it is heard. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 29-Mar-2022
Comment from Anne Johnston
Great entry for the four line poem contest. God truly is all powerful and everywhere present. We know He is in control. Prayer does change things. As the Bible says "the effectual fervent prayer of a righteous man availeth much.
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Great entry for the four line poem contest. God truly is all powerful and everywhere present. We know He is in control. Prayer does change things. As the Bible says "the effectual fervent prayer of a righteous man availeth much.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2022
Comment from judiverse
Let us pray for an end to wars everywhere. I'm sure everyone wants to see the end of war. Unfortunately, war has been around as long as mankind. There's always so much greed and hate behind it. Your syllable count is correct in this and your word choices of omnipotent and omnipresent are excellent. Best of luck in the contest. judi
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Let us pray for an end to wars everywhere. I'm sure everyone wants to see the end of war. Unfortunately, war has been around as long as mankind. There's always so much greed and hate behind it. Your syllable count is correct in this and your word choices of omnipotent and omnipresent are excellent. Best of luck in the contest. judi
Comment Written 29-Mar-2022