Comment from Judy Lawless

Excellent

Another well-written chapter, amahra. It seems that all these people do is fight wars. I don't know how they have the heart to continue, but like in Ukraine these days, they can't give up. I hope the next battle goes better than the last.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022

Thank you, Judy, for your review. At the beginning of the book, Gangus was summoned by Raziel, the god of war, to combine the tribes and eliminate the troublesome Nordoxz. Then the land will be his. Always a pleasure reading your review.

reply by Judy Lawless on 28-Mar-2022

You are most welcome, Amahra.

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this excellent written post. I have missed this story and am glad you added to it.

"She looked up--forced a smile and nodded. (omit the beginning quotation marks in front of 'She')

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 Comment Written 28-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022

Thank you, Barbara your review. I will make the correction.

Comment from Rachel Jamerson1

Excellent

OK - I'm impressed. This story reminds me of one of those electronic games my children play. Very well written fantasy tale. However not an easy read for those not exposed to the fantasy world. Thanks for sharing.

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 Comment Written 28-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022

Thank you for your review.