God On Dawn
Tonight, God made Dawn an Angel26 total reviews
Comment from Ben Colder
It looks as if you covered all the bases in this write. Although Hell was never created for anyone to be, it has widened its borders for the many who have found their way there/
Well done. Best to you
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It looks as if you covered all the bases in this write. Although Hell was never created for anyone to be, it has widened its borders for the many who have found their way there/
Well done. Best to you
Comment Written 12-Feb-2022
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
I have to say that a lot of these pieces tend to be the same thing written over and over again with only minimal differences. Had creativity deserted this writer... I really hope not.
All the best
GMG
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Hi there,
I have to say that a lot of these pieces tend to be the same thing written over and over again with only minimal differences. Had creativity deserted this writer... I really hope not.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 12-Feb-2022
Comment from karenina
You wrote to theme, included the required words in a cohesive manner and stayed true to the six sentence structure. Forget so words exactly. Surely it's fiction! None of us really knows!
Karenina
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You wrote to theme, included the required words in a cohesive manner and stayed true to the six sentence structure. Forget so words exactly. Surely it's fiction! None of us really knows!
Karenina
Comment Written 12-Feb-2022
Comment from jwsteele
It would be perfect if this account is accurate. Personally, I have no idea? It's impossible to know the Ultimate Truth. But what you wrote is logical and rational. l appreciate your perspective on this secret. Thanks for the sharing the idea.
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It would be perfect if this account is accurate. Personally, I have no idea? It's impossible to know the Ultimate Truth. But what you wrote is logical and rational. l appreciate your perspective on this secret. Thanks for the sharing the idea.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2022
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your ultra-concise writing is thought-provoking and very meaningful. The first two characters spent their lives either improving others' lives or saving them. The third was intent on taking lives!
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Your ultra-concise writing is thought-provoking and very meaningful. The first two characters spent their lives either improving others' lives or saving them. The third was intent on taking lives!
Comment Written 11-Feb-2022
Comment from lancellot
This is a straight forward accounting of different people dying of the same disease. the first two received different outcomes. We don't know why. The serial killer got sent to Hell. That was easy, but the third. You changed. You did not tell us the career of the third. You only told us what he did wrong. Also, this doesn't work as a story.
God ordered him to go to {hell.}
-Hell, proper name of a place.
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This is a straight forward accounting of different people dying of the same disease. the first two received different outcomes. We don't know why. The serial killer got sent to Hell. That was easy, but the third. You changed. You did not tell us the career of the third. You only told us what he did wrong. Also, this doesn't work as a story.
God ordered him to go to {hell.}
-Hell, proper name of a place.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2022
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Good for God! I'm glad the other two were rewarded and the evil one was sent to hell. I hope He does that to all the vicious criminals. Well done on delivering a great contest entry with so few words. Good luck! :)) Sandra
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Good for God! I'm glad the other two were rewarded and the evil one was sent to hell. I hope He does that to all the vicious criminals. Well done on delivering a great contest entry with so few words. Good luck! :)) Sandra
Comment Written 11-Feb-2022
Comment from John Ciarmello
This is beautifully written. I have read of few of your works and have enjoyed each one as much as the next. I wish you much success with the contest
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This is beautifully written. I have read of few of your works and have enjoyed each one as much as the next. I wish you much success with the contest
Comment Written 11-Feb-2022
Comment from BLACKTITANIUM86
Not to stray from the subject matter, but I always thought you picked a dope name to have, as an artist. And the fact that you actually elevate the name, with amazing writing skills is hot!! Nevertheless, whenever someone's number is called, that means that it was written and etched In stone. So, death is nothing to grieve about. For, God only sends his wraith upon the evil and wicked. And a lot of the times your going to hear a vast of false news. So, that you can slowly give away your freedom . Keep Writing. And don't forget to stop by to talk to me. Stay Connected
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Not to stray from the subject matter, but I always thought you picked a dope name to have, as an artist. And the fact that you actually elevate the name, with amazing writing skills is hot!! Nevertheless, whenever someone's number is called, that means that it was written and etched In stone. So, death is nothing to grieve about. For, God only sends his wraith upon the evil and wicked. And a lot of the times your going to hear a vast of false news. So, that you can slowly give away your freedom . Keep Writing. And don't forget to stop by to talk to me. Stay Connected
Comment Written 11-Feb-2022
Comment from Ricky1024
"God on Dawn"
This is a 42 Word Spiritual Fiction Six Sentences Writing Contest.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Good luck with this one.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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"God on Dawn"
This is a 42 Word Spiritual Fiction Six Sentences Writing Contest.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
...
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Good luck with this one.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 11-Feb-2022
