Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This twenty-one-word spiritual story, Chess Match in Heaven, has the proper word count and uses the required words. The idea is acknowledging that God has ransomed the world and the game for Satan is over. Neat.

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 Comment Written 07-Feb-2022

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022

Thank you man! I rabbit appreciate that. Btw I'm so sorry I thought this was blind. I didn't promote it! I'm sorry. Thank you Bill

Comment from Theodore McDowell

Excellent

Great poem for the prompt. In twenty-one words you have presented the gospel in an incredibly creative and clever way. Well done. Hope everything is going well. How are you doing on Medium?

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 Comment Written 07-Feb-2022

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022

Hey man thank you! Ugh im so sorry. I thought this was blind! I didn't even promote it! You are great for actually reviewing it thank you.

It's good. We'll it's interesting. I've been on it! I'm just feeling around still. But. To be honest, I have No Idea how to actually submit to one of the awesome publications there. I never see any link or submission email etc. Am I missing something? It would be a dream, seriously a dream come true, if I actually had one of my essays read by ppl not on FS. Not that that is bad! Not at all. I've just never had more than 10 or so ppl read before. It would be CRAZY if that happened. I just have to figure out how. Haha. Who knows, maybe a good group will like some of my writing.

Thank you for asking!!