Football - A Novel
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Comment from Wendy G
I know the biopsy won't be good news and K suspects the same. Gabe will cope and help them all. He is right to teach a lesson about self-discipline - that is a lesson for life, and won't be quickly forgotten. Well written.
Wendy
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2022
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I know the biopsy won't be good news and K suspects the same. Gabe will cope and help them all. He is right to teach a lesson about self-discipline - that is a lesson for life, and won't be quickly forgotten. Well written.
Wendy
Comment Written 09-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2022
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from judiverse
i'm glad Gabe held the line against his errant players. It will be a good lesson for them. I think Katherine made the right decision about not telling Gabe about the biopsy until she's learned the results. He'd be worrying needlessly and making a fuss. You do a great job of showing Gabriel's relationship with Katherine's sons. He seems to be in love with them, too. And he can provide the male touch they need. Great chapter. judi
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i'm glad Gabe held the line against his errant players. It will be a good lesson for them. I think Katherine made the right decision about not telling Gabe about the biopsy until she's learned the results. He'd be worrying needlessly and making a fuss. You do a great job of showing Gabriel's relationship with Katherine's sons. He seems to be in love with them, too. And he can provide the male touch they need. Great chapter. judi
Comment Written 09-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2022
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Thank you for the kind review and understanding.
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You're welcome. I'll be curious to find out about those test results. judi
Comment from royowen
It seems that Gabriel is proving what a great coach should be, and even if it affects the team's percentage, that's worth the sacrifice to perfect the discipline that brings about a champion team, which will always beat a team of champions beautifully written Barbara, well done, blessings Roy
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It seems that Gabriel is proving what a great coach should be, and even if it affects the team's percentage, that's worth the sacrifice to perfect the discipline that brings about a champion team, which will always beat a team of champions beautifully written Barbara, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 09-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2022
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Most welcome
Comment from Ric Myworld
They sure have done a great job of keeping their distance for a long time in a world where most are full steam ahead these day. It would be great to bring back the thrill of the chase where young people could gain that sense of appreciation. Thanks for sharing. Hope you got a good report on the wrist!
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2022
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They sure have done a great job of keeping their distance for a long time in a world where most are full steam ahead these day. It would be great to bring back the thrill of the chase where young people could gain that sense of appreciation. Thanks for sharing. Hope you got a good report on the wrist!
Comment Written 09-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2022
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I honestly believe a relationship needs to grow and be nurtured. Because it doesn't happen any more, I think is a direction relationship to our high divorce rate. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Gabriel tries to find out what Katherine is hiding.
Barb Your chapter in the book Football -
Football Chapter 41. I like how wrote the dialque,
I'M wondering why is Katherine not telling Gabriel about the biopsy
Gert
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022
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Gabriel tries to find out what Katherine is hiding.
Barb Your chapter in the book Football -
Football Chapter 41. I like how wrote the dialque,
I'M wondering why is Katherine not telling Gabriel about the biopsy
Gert
Comment Written 09-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022
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She says she doesn't want to worry him over nothing. Thank you for the kind review.
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You are welcome Barb.
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Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Brilliant dialog--every word, as always, believable, as is her reluctance to tell Gabriel about the biopsy--her anxiety is made manifest--brings me back to a scare I got years ago.
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Brilliant dialog--every word, as always, believable, as is her reluctance to tell Gabriel about the biopsy--her anxiety is made manifest--brings me back to a scare I got years ago.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022
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Thank you for understanding.
Comment from Ben Colder
I think it is a good idea to post the chapter, I have thought of doing the same. It is for sure we will hear wedding bells in time. Good one, Barb. I see nothing wrong.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022
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I think it is a good idea to post the chapter, I have thought of doing the same. It is for sure we will hear wedding bells in time. Good one, Barb. I see nothing wrong.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2022
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Thank you for the kind review and suggestion.
Comment from Sankey
Always glad to get to another chapter of your great storytelling. Seems they are getting closer, and closer. Just one small suggestion but it's up to you. country team won(,) again last night.
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Always glad to get to another chapter of your great storytelling. Seems they are getting closer, and closer. Just one small suggestion but it's up to you. country team won(,) again last night.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2022
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Thank you for the catch. I appreciate your help.
Comment from damommy
Gabriel knows something's going on with Katherine. She might as well tell him now. I like that discipline comes first with him. That's something that will stand any young person in good stead in the future.
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Gabriel knows something's going on with Katherine. She might as well tell him now. I like that discipline comes first with him. That's something that will stand any young person in good stead in the future.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022
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Thank you for the kind review. Yes, Gabriel understands discipline as does Katherine.
Comment from Anne Johnston
Once again I enjoyed your chapter. It must be very hard for Katherine not to share what is going on with Gabriel, since she knows he really cares. I especially liked a line: "No. He wants a well-disciplined team. If they don't follow the rules, they don't play." Sounds like he is dedicated to his job.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022
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Once again I enjoyed your chapter. It must be very hard for Katherine not to share what is going on with Gabriel, since she knows he really cares. I especially liked a line: "No. He wants a well-disciplined team. If they don't follow the rules, they don't play." Sounds like he is dedicated to his job.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022
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Gabriel is very dedicated to his job and to helping young boys. Thank you for the kind review.
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You are welcome.