Angels on high
Our loved ones are now angels in the spirit world11 total reviews
Comment from Jay Kemper
Great poem. It flows well and has great spiritual and emotional meaning to many people. Small critique: I didn't much like the repeat of "home" when the other words rhymed and were different, but I can see why finding another word that also rhymes would be difficult, so more of a pet peeve on my part
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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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Great poem. It flows well and has great spiritual and emotional meaning to many people. Small critique: I didn't much like the repeat of "home" when the other words rhymed and were different, but I can see why finding another word that also rhymes would be difficult, so more of a pet peeve on my part
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Comment Written 05-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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Thank you
