Revenge
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Comment from Wendy G
So many incidents all happening at once, and none of them is looking good! It will need a miracle to get it all sorted - but I am sure you have it in hand! Let's hope Williams survives and Allie is found. Of course he will, she will be! Next please! (I don't know how you do it!)
Wendy
(Query: "Allie was drug from the car" I assume this is American? We would say "dragged".)
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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So many incidents all happening at once, and none of them is looking good! It will need a miracle to get it all sorted - but I am sure you have it in hand! Let's hope Williams survives and Allie is found. Of course he will, she will be! Next please! (I don't know how you do it!)
Wendy
(Query: "Allie was drug from the car" I assume this is American? We would say "dragged".)
Comment Written 14-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Thank you so much. Forgive the cut and paste but I am so far behind with showing my appreciation to everyone. Please know it is sincere. This story went in a darker direction than I originally planned (maybe my life got caught up in it) but as we draw closer to the end, I am thrilled that you have continued to follow and enjoy it.
I hope you have the best of holidays. Hugs, Carol
Comment from lyenochka
Oh, it's not looking good. We thought Allie would be safe but Vito is even more evil than we thought. And seems like Welcher and Moretti have a more evil plan and a lot more people working for them.
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Allie was drug from the car (dragged)
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Oh, it's not looking good. We thought Allie would be safe but Vito is even more evil than we thought. And seems like Welcher and Moretti have a more evil plan and a lot more people working for them.
One comment:
Allie was drug from the car (dragged)
Comment Written 14-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Thank you so much. Forgive the cut and paste but I am so far behind with showing my appreciation to everyone. Please know it is sincere. This story went in a darker direction than I originally planned (maybe my life got caught up in it) but as we draw closer to the end, I am thrilled that you have continued to follow and enjoy it.
I hope you have the best of holidays. Hugs, Carol
Comment from royowen
As well as Sam being abducted, now we have Allie being taken in a similar way, talk about the best laid plans of men and mice. It looks like the collective cunning of the FBI and others has been completely foiled, but not only that they've got a sneering Welcher Sherrif too. Beautifully written Carol, how do you do it? Well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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As well as Sam being abducted, now we have Allie being taken in a similar way, talk about the best laid plans of men and mice. It looks like the collective cunning of the FBI and others has been completely foiled, but not only that they've got a sneering Welcher Sherrif too. Beautifully written Carol, how do you do it? Well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 14-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Thank you so much. Forgive the cut and paste but I am so far behind with showing my appreciation to everyone. Please know it is sincere. This story went in a darker direction than I originally planned (maybe my life got caught up in it) but as we draw closer to the end, I am thrilled that you have continued to follow and enjoy it.
I hope you have the best of holidays. Hugs, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I was so pleased to see you'd posted before I went to bed. This is 'hold your breath' exciting, Carol, there should be a warning at the top of these posts warning frail old ladies like me to keep their blood pressure tablets close by!!! He now has them all! But, hopefully, they have all escaped from the mansion by now! You're on a roll, my friend!! Next!! Love and more hugs. Sandra xxx
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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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I was so pleased to see you'd posted before I went to bed. This is 'hold your breath' exciting, Carol, there should be a warning at the top of these posts warning frail old ladies like me to keep their blood pressure tablets close by!!! He now has them all! But, hopefully, they have all escaped from the mansion by now! You're on a roll, my friend!! Next!! Love and more hugs. Sandra xxx
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Comment Written 14-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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So glad you are home and in my corner, cheering me on. Thank you!
I so appreciate you.
Love ya, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
You just keep making things go downhill. It does look as if anyone is safe. I thought the team had everything in place that this was going to go down smoothly, but it seems it is the bad guys who are getting their way. Every chapter seems to be taking us further away from the case being solved.
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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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You just keep making things go downhill. It does look as if anyone is safe. I thought the team had everything in place that this was going to go down smoothly, but it seems it is the bad guys who are getting their way. Every chapter seems to be taking us further away from the case being solved.
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Comment Written 14-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Thank you so much. Forgive the cut and paste but I am so far behind with showing my appreciation to everyone. Please know it is sincere. This story went in a darker direction than I originally planned (maybe my life got caught up in it) but as we draw closer to the end, I am thrilled that you have continued to follow and enjoy it.
I hope you have the best of holidays. Hugs, Carol