Revenge
Viewing comments for Chapter 36 "Revenge - Chap 36"Evil stalks the dynamic crime team
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Comment from Wendy G
The tension is reaching me even in Australia. So much is on the line, so little time, so many complexities to overcome, especially with their ability to disguise with make-up. I am sure that right will prevail, but it won't be easy. Fascinating and intriguing.
Wendy
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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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The tension is reaching me even in Australia. So much is on the line, so little time, so many complexities to overcome, especially with their ability to disguise with make-up. I am sure that right will prevail, but it won't be easy. Fascinating and intriguing.
Wendy
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Comment Written 11-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Sending apologies for my tardiness and lots of hugs and love for you and yours for the holidays. I pray that you and your family feel the blessings of the season. As always, I hold you dear to my heart.
Have a great day and may all God's blessings find you.
Always, Carol
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Tension has to build, and it builds in passage of time, mystery and crime go on, chapter after chapter, this chapter 36 adds to the whole, a criminal's nature continues, corrections to a criminal remains at a far, new episode the writer shows, though offering knowledge, lessons continue naturally, there are characters simply perform the job, Max Welcher plays the role as conscience or moral reminder; nice climax; revenge continues; well said, well done; keep writing. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR
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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Tension has to build, and it builds in passage of time, mystery and crime go on, chapter after chapter, this chapter 36 adds to the whole, a criminal's nature continues, corrections to a criminal remains at a far, new episode the writer shows, though offering knowledge, lessons continue naturally, there are characters simply perform the job, Max Welcher plays the role as conscience or moral reminder; nice climax; revenge continues; well said, well done; keep writing. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR
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Comment Written 11-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Sending apologies for my tardiness and lots of hugs and love for you and yours for the holidays. I pray that you and your family feel the blessings of the season. As always, I hold you dear to my heart.
Have a great day and may all God's blessings find you.
Always, Carol
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
High time for a SSSSSSSeries bonussssss. SSSSSStupendous!
The dishwasher stuck his head through the swinging door and yelled, "Tommy, the [cooks=>COOK'S] looking for you."
'Wait, I'll go. Tell me where everything's kept. I can use the passageways. I know you can too, Max, but you aren't familiar with the studio. I can go faster. Remember, the [clocks=>CLOCK'S] ticking."
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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High time for a SSSSSSSeries bonussssss. SSSSSStupendous!
The dishwasher stuck his head through the swinging door and yelled, "Tommy, the [cooks=>COOK'S] looking for you."
'Wait, I'll go. Tell me where everything's kept. I can use the passageways. I know you can too, Max, but you aren't familiar with the studio. I can go faster. Remember, the [clocks=>CLOCK'S] ticking."
Comment Written 11-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Sending apologies for my tardiness and lots of hugs and love for you and yours for the holidays. I pray that you and your family feel the blessings of the season. As always, I hold you dear to my heart.
Have a great day and may all God's blessings find you.
Always, Carol
