Comment from SimianSavant

Excellent

I am so sorry to hear of your recent loss. Thank you for sharing a small piece of his life with us. I look forward to reading more about him in your book.

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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2021

Thanks so much. Jan

Comment from Elizabeth Emerald

Excellent

Poignant and heartfelt tribute. I just read your other poem--Thanks for backstory in notes--a roller-coaster indeed. I hope the funeral went as well as could be expected.

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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2021

The funeral went well. Mu daughter, granddaughter, and I all participated. The military funeral is in the morning. Thanks. Jan

Comment from Theodore McDowell

Excellent

Another fine poem about the sudden loss of your husband at such a young age. I know that you are proud of his service. My dad also died with military honors after serving in the Navy during WWII.

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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2021

Theodore. Actually, he was 70, but still young in my eyes. Thanks. Jan

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Written for my husband
Military Honors
Rdfrdmom2
Your haiku has the right count of syllables.
And your words speak of how much he deserved military honors
Gert

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2021

Thanks, Gert. Jan

reply by Gert sherwood on 11-Dec-2021

You are most welcome Jan.
Gert

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

A poignant write for your beloved husband, Jan. Your syllable count is correct per line and the image is awesome, but sad. Best wishes in the contest.
Sincere condolences and prayers for you and your family.
Respectfully,
Jan

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2021

Thank you so much, jan. We have a Veterans' Cemetery less than 10 miles from our house. I have been to numerous ceremonies there and they are all breath-takingly inspiring. jan

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

My condolences on the passing of your husband. Your words capture his dedication to serving his country and how he will be honored. My father served three years in WWII, so I can relate to your words.

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2021

Thank you so much, mermaids. Rdfrdmom2

Comment from Cindy Warren

Excellent

I'm so sorry you lost your husband. After twenty two years of service I'm sure the military honors were well deserved. Best of luck in the contest.

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2021

Thank you so much, Cindy. Rdfrdmom2

Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

I wish I had a seven for this. My most profound respect to my comrade in arms. He was a cut above the rest, and that says much--my blessings to you and your family.

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2021

Thank you, again, Ben. Rdfrdmom2

Comment from Sherry Asbury

Excellent

God love Aubrey for his service to this country - and God love you for this great haiku that says it all. I know God will hold you both in the palm of His hand and will give you comfort. I bless every serviceman for protecting this land!!

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2021

Amen, Sherry. The last song played at his funeral was Casting Crowns' "Scars in Heaven." If you haven't heard it, check it out. Rdfrdmom2

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

What a fate! How sad is the tragedy! But honors never fade, it speaks, is remembered as a precious worth; you have expressed the value and recognition to the cause of service for the nation by your husband is saluting; well said, well done; keep writing. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2021

Thank you, Alcreator. These two posts are the first two things I have written in months. In fact, I haven't been on Fanstory in months but I plan to become active again now. Rdfrdmom2