Revenge
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Comment from royowen
That was a close one, as far as Samantha was concerned, but brave Marian has wrested James's attention by feigning a fainting act, she manages to drive away despite the lustiness of Jame's desire, I hope Jasmine is safe, I suspect you will have her safe and sound, before the meeting ant Francine's that night. A wonderful post Carol, well done, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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That was a close one, as far as Samantha was concerned, but brave Marian has wrested James's attention by feigning a fainting act, she manages to drive away despite the lustiness of Jame's desire, I hope Jasmine is safe, I suspect you will have her safe and sound, before the meeting ant Francine's that night. A wonderful post Carol, well done, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 09-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Though it sounds like I am complaining because I can't catch up.... well, I guess I am, but it doesn't change how much I appreciate your support and continued encouragement. Thank you as always.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from robyn corum
Carol,
Looks like they saved each other - first by closing and rehiding that door. Then with the fall down the steps - everyone is on guard and trying to keep the others safe. Nice teamwork!
A note:
--> her body against the table, pressing his (what?) tight against her.
Thanks!
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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Carol,
Looks like they saved each other - first by closing and rehiding that door. Then with the fall down the steps - everyone is on guard and trying to keep the others safe. Nice teamwork!
A note:
--> her body against the table, pressing his (what?) tight against her.
Thanks!
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Comment Written 09-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Though it sounds like I am complaining because I can't catch up.... well, I guess I am, but it doesn't change how much I appreciate your support and continued encouragement. Thank you as always.
Hugs, Carol