Football - A Novel
Viewing comments for Chapter 64 "Football Chapter 34 part 3"A mother faces life's struggles.
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Comment from Tina Crute
I think it was genius how you showed Katherine's emotions, when Katherine went to the kitchen, right after she found out about Ivory, and cried. That is so realistic. You can hold things together, but sometimes even the strong need to cry. I enjoyed your story, especially the relationship between Gabriel and Katherine. I have a feeling drama is about to unfold and Ivory will be the cause of it. I am pretty new to the book, but I am enjoying it!
I am sorry you have to go through the holidays with a healing wrist. Please take care.
Tina
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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I think it was genius how you showed Katherine's emotions, when Katherine went to the kitchen, right after she found out about Ivory, and cried. That is so realistic. You can hold things together, but sometimes even the strong need to cry. I enjoyed your story, especially the relationship between Gabriel and Katherine. I have a feeling drama is about to unfold and Ivory will be the cause of it. I am pretty new to the book, but I am enjoying it!
I am sorry you have to go through the holidays with a healing wrist. Please take care.
Tina
Comment Written 05-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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Thank you for the kind review and encouragement.
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You deserved it. Great storyline!
Tina
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Gripping--you've really nailed your characters--every nuance rings true!
Except for Jordan [Sugg: COMMA] the boys have eaten and are in bed.
[Putting=>As she put] both hands on the counter, tears crept down her cheeks.
Bill walked in the kitchen. "Angie, it's late [sugg: SEMICOLON] we need to get home."
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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Gripping--you've really nailed your characters--every nuance rings true!
Except for Jordan [Sugg: COMMA] the boys have eaten and are in bed.
[Putting=>As she put] both hands on the counter, tears crept down her cheeks.
Bill walked in the kitchen. "Angie, it's late [sugg: SEMICOLON] we need to get home."
Comment Written 05-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ben Colder
It was a shakeup for all with Ivory lurking. Glad your wrist is doing well. Looking forward to reading about wedding bells before long. Good one, Barb.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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It was a shakeup for all with Ivory lurking. Glad your wrist is doing well. Looking forward to reading about wedding bells before long. Good one, Barb.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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Thank you for the kind review and encouragement.
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Don't forget my book when it is published.
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I won't!!!
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Barbara.Wilkey,
Nice piece in continuation having enchanting flow throughout from the beginning to the end. Ivory episode has made it more interesting. The story is moving ahead smoothly.
Flawless, and PERFECT by now.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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Hello Barbara.Wilkey,
Nice piece in continuation having enchanting flow throughout from the beginning to the end. Ivory episode has made it more interesting. The story is moving ahead smoothly.
Flawless, and PERFECT by now.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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Thank you for the kind review and encouragement.
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Barbara.Wilkey, Most Welcome!
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hi Barb,
This chapter is showing that Melton Ivory a starker is real pest. I'm asking 'why?' here I am worrying that Gabriel gets too violent and gets where he can not control him self when he gets angry.
And as you said in your authors note. I hope Metlon will not be Katerine's new beau.
Gert
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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Hi Barb,
This chapter is showing that Melton Ivory a starker is real pest. I'm asking 'why?' here I am worrying that Gabriel gets too violent and gets where he can not control him self when he gets angry.
And as you said in your authors note. I hope Metlon will not be Katerine's new beau.
Gert
Comment Written 05-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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Thank you for the kind review and encouragement.
Comment from bhogg
Barbara--like all your work, professionally written with great pace. Even a good bit of tension in this one. I've missed a couple of the chapters, so should check back and get up to date.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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Barbara--like all your work, professionally written with great pace. Even a good bit of tension in this one. I've missed a couple of the chapters, so should check back and get up to date.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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Thank you for the kind review and encouragement.
Comment from nomi338
If ever two people need to be together as a couple it is this one. I very much fear that this character who will not take no for a final answer is going to force Gabriel to do something violent, and it will not be good for either of them.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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If ever two people need to be together as a couple it is this one. I very much fear that this character who will not take no for a final answer is going to force Gabriel to do something violent, and it will not be good for either of them.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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Thank you for the kind review and encouragement.
Comment from Judy Lawless
This is another good chapter, Barbara. Gab can still lose his temper when it comes to looking out for Katherine, but at least he recognizes his problem and is starting to get it under control more quickly. I didn't even notice the length of this post, because it was an easy and enjoyable read.
I'm happy to hear your wrist is mending.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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This is another good chapter, Barbara. Gab can still lose his temper when it comes to looking out for Katherine, but at least he recognizes his problem and is starting to get it under control more quickly. I didn't even notice the length of this post, because it was an easy and enjoyable read.
I'm happy to hear your wrist is mending.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Katherine and Gabe are a complicated couple; lots of headaches do arise but if they have faith these problems will get solved in time. I like your story so much; very captivating.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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Katherine and Gabe are a complicated couple; lots of headaches do arise but if they have faith these problems will get solved in time. I like your story so much; very captivating.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from AJ McCall
What does this Melton guy not understand about Katherine not wanting to be with him?!!! She already told him she was in a relationship. This is such an ignorant, sneaky person. These types of things are my pet peeves. (You must be doing a good job though, because I am hating someone who doesn't exist, lol.) I can't wait to see what happens next!! And I'm glad your wrist is getting better.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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What does this Melton guy not understand about Katherine not wanting to be with him?!!! She already told him she was in a relationship. This is such an ignorant, sneaky person. These types of things are my pet peeves. (You must be doing a good job though, because I am hating someone who doesn't exist, lol.) I can't wait to see what happens next!! And I'm glad your wrist is getting better.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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Thank you for the encouragement.
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You're very welcome!
