Revenge
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Comment from Judy Lawless
You've done a superb job of carrying on with this plot, Carol! What an imagination you've given Sam. Allie didn't say quite what Garth suggested so I hope that doesn't spook James, but he's got lots of incentive to move and hopefully make a mistake. Keep them coming.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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You've done a superb job of carrying on with this plot, Carol! What an imagination you've given Sam. Allie didn't say quite what Garth suggested so I hope that doesn't spook James, but he's got lots of incentive to move and hopefully make a mistake. Keep them coming.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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I think he was so enraged just seeing her face and hearing her voice after hating her and planning his revenge for eight years he probably didn't even notice the actual words. He's about to play his hand... I hope everyone else is on their toes. Thank you for the awesome review and the stars.
Hugs, Carol
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You're welcome, Carol. Let's hope that's the case.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
So James is going to have Allie at Francine's or Jasmine? I can't wait to find out for sure. This is getting better and better. I really like this story and can't wait for more. You're doing a good job with this.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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So James is going to have Allie at Francine's or Jasmine? I can't wait to find out for sure. This is getting better and better. I really like this story and can't wait for more. You're doing a good job with this.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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Thank you Barbara. I always appreciate your input and am glad that I can do the story justice. I think the cards are played and the game is about to begin. I hope you continue to enjoy it. Your words and the stars added sunshine to my gloomy day. Thank you!!!
Hugs, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
It sounds as though Samantha is really baiting the hook. There isn't a lot of time for the FBI to crack this case. I don't know who or how James plans to get Allie to be the perfect woman for the imaginary client. Wouldn't they need to be a willing participant?
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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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It sounds as though Samantha is really baiting the hook. There isn't a lot of time for the FBI to crack this case. I don't know who or how James plans to get Allie to be the perfect woman for the imaginary client. Wouldn't they need to be a willing participant?
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Comment Written 05-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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I guess we wait and see.... I think Jaz will somehow play into this scenario as well... But he has to snare Allie first, huh.. I doubt she will go quietly.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Gag-worthy indeed! Brilliant repartee--Sam is a stellar actress. I would have thought James would be gleeful at seeing Allie purportedly believing Jaz should "turn herself in."
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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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Gag-worthy indeed! Brilliant repartee--Sam is a stellar actress. I would have thought James would be gleeful at seeing Allie purportedly believing Jaz should "turn herself in."
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Comment Written 05-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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Normally, yes...but his hate at seeing her face bristled the hairs on the back of his neck. things keep disrupting his plans for her (like the disappearance of Tiffany) and he lost his temper. He now thinks he's back in control...
Smiles, Carol
