Revenge
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Comment from royowen
That would be something, Samantha seeing Welcher, he now knows who it is who took the compromising photos of him, I wonder how he rigged the jasmine thing, unless Tiffany is really Jasmine? Very complex plot, and very clever Carol, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2021
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That would be something, Samantha seeing Welcher, he now knows who it is who took the compromising photos of him, I wonder how he rigged the jasmine thing, unless Tiffany is really Jasmine? Very complex plot, and very clever Carol, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 27-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2021
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Thanks for continuing to support me and for enjoying the story. Some times its difficult to write and other times, I push myself to get lost in the characters. Life moves forward.
Always, Carol
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You?re doing well
Comment from Carol Clark2
This is an exciting chapter. Hopefully the team will finally get everything sorted out soon and all working together. I like Samantha's greeting to Welcher when he saw her with Hank & Emmy. One small fix:
His two deputies stood at attention as Welcher's (Welcher rapped...). Great chapter! Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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This is an exciting chapter. Hopefully the team will finally get everything sorted out soon and all working together. I like Samantha's greeting to Welcher when he saw her with Hank & Emmy. One small fix:
His two deputies stood at attention as Welcher's (Welcher rapped...). Great chapter! Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 27-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Fixed....
Something big is about to happen so hold on tight!
Hugs, Carol
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Holding on! Lol. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This already good story, just got a lot better.
Once the cloudburst passed, Poppa and Tango finished their full of homemade apple pie (finished their fill????)
"Oh my God, Tango, tell him to turn on the tv. (TV)
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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This already good story, just got a lot better.
Once the cloudburst passed, Poppa and Tango finished their full of homemade apple pie (finished their fill????)
"Oh my God, Tango, tell him to turn on the tv. (TV)
Comment Written 27-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Fixed and thankful for your eagle eye as always. I think my tired soul writes to exist but loses its focus more and more each day. I appreciate your help and your enjoyment in my writing.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Judy Lawless
Carol, you have me still biting my finger nails, as I try to put all these pieces together. I don't know how you're keeping them all straight. It's an adventure full of adrenaline. I love Sam's comment when she ran into the Sheriff, but I worry about a tracker on her phone. Well done.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Carol, you have me still biting my finger nails, as I try to put all these pieces together. I don't know how you're keeping them all straight. It's an adventure full of adrenaline. I love Sam's comment when she ran into the Sheriff, but I worry about a tracker on her phone. Well done.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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thank you, Judy. I appreciate your kindness and the review. I believe the person who had her phone was making sure she wasn't receiving threatening messages and meant well...though it was scary.
Hugs, Carol
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Your welcome, Carol. Thanks for the explanation. It seems I'm suspicious of everyone in your stories. lol
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I can fully understand that...LOL
Comment from BethShelby
Tiffany is the one who really killed the producer thinking she was acting. Does Vito know where Jaz is? You have probaly told me already but I can't remember. This is another exceiting chapter.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Tiffany is the one who really killed the producer thinking she was acting. Does Vito know where Jaz is? You have probaly told me already but I can't remember. This is another exceiting chapter.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Yes, he has her drugged and locked away so when he has Allie he can taunt her with the image before she is caught for murder.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
These long and frustrating last two weeks finally over, it's good to be back reading and enjoying your story again. I may even have to go back and read a few of the previous posts again, since my minds been out to lunch. Hope life is on the improve for you! Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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These long and frustrating last two weeks finally over, it's good to be back reading and enjoying your story again. I may even have to go back and read a few of the previous posts again, since my minds been out to lunch. Hope life is on the improve for you! Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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No such luck but I am worried about you. My life is normal when it continues to suck, but I miss your humor and want to make sure you are doing okay.
Hugs, Carol
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Oh, I'm good. Tougher than oak. But it's nice to have you thinking about me. I don't sleep but two or three hours a night most of the time, so my room was the hang out, with three or four nurses hanging around in the wee hours when they didn't have much to do. LOL.
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I see! I bet that was "happy hour" lol... Glad you are feeling better or so you say. You would lie to me anyhow. Hugs, Carol
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Happy hour would have been a good idea. Except, no one had any alcohol. But, don't think I didn't ask. They mostly hung out because they couldn't keep me in bed. I told them that if they were going to keep me in bed, they should move me to a king size so there would be room for us all under the covers. Hugs, Ric.
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I bet you did!!!
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You know I did!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Mystery and Crime Fiction, Chapter 27 in the book Revenge, speaks Jaz is framed for murder; well said, well done, thanks 4 sharing this, write more, fast, time is limited, I, DR, wrote 114 books, R 123600/N21. ALCREATOR
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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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This Mystery and Crime Fiction, Chapter 27 in the book Revenge, speaks Jaz is framed for murder; well said, well done, thanks 4 sharing this, write more, fast, time is limited, I, DR, wrote 114 books, R 123600/N21. ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 27-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much for stopping by to read the chapter and to enjoy it. i appreciate your time and comments.
Always, Carol
Comment from Patty Palmer
This is a good chapter where some things are falling into place/as other pops. This Sherriff Weltcher is a real piece of work. I'll be cheering when someone gives him his dues.
Glad to see you here! I hope things have settled down for you and your family. God bless
Patty
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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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This is a good chapter where some things are falling into place/as other pops. This Sherriff Weltcher is a real piece of work. I'll be cheering when someone gives him his dues.
Glad to see you here! I hope things have settled down for you and your family. God bless
Patty
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Comment Written 27-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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thank you, Patty. I wish I could say that life is getting easier, but it appears some learn to work the problem better than others and it gets more twisted by the moment. Thank you though for your kindness.
Hugs, Carol